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6 - UNLIMITED Lines
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No Recycling
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-14-04 at 02:17 PM

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The Kid P-Dizzle has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-13-04 10:13 PM.

Ok, let Dizzle speak on Vicious Beast, this bitch is weak
6 and 3? You will increase, your losses, you about to feel defeat
You a real MC? Bring your skill to me
Even if you rapped 'bout STD's you couldn't spit as ill as P
I kill MC's with obvious skill, no need to be askin' why
You was Panther 'cuz you pussy, now I'm bout to Black ya eye
You rap 'bout as graphic as Atari, phase me? Hardly
And I'm sorry but this "cat's" even too wack for the safari
If you sad 'bout this battle go to Maury Povich, you po' bitch
I got some "grave" news - battlin' me? You diggin' your own ditch
Listen you homeless, punkass, don't spit none of your dumb trash
I must've nutted on UPS, it's amazing how my punch lines "cum" fast
You don't want that, new loss, you gone tell me to stop it
You a Vicious Beast? Like a monster? Oh, I get it - you came out the closet
You lost this, practice next time before you bring it to The Kid
You got raped like Tupac allegedly did while he was doin' his bid

(For those of you who don't know, Vicious Beast was formerly Black Panther, then he got kicked off the site)

And also, when he was Black Panther his record was 6-3.

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Vicious Beast has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-14-04 11:23 AM.

Ok so ur da Kid dey call P-Dizzle, fo shizzle my nizzle,
Ur raps r floatin around like da magic school bus wit Ms. Frizzle, forshizzle

shut ur wannabe Snoop Dog ass up in dis battle u gettin denied,
If ur pimp u cant be gay and its no lie ur automatically disqualified

If u a kid and dats wat u plead...u should stick to fairytales and fiction,
Ur a punk ass bitch u can not step in my jurus diction for ur conviction

Why r u even battlin me cause ur soft and gushy like a wussy
After dis battle Imma make dat P in ur name stand for a pussy

had to rush cause I was runnin out of time

Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

nice nice, here it is.

vicious beast-lacked seriousness, the izzle abuse really kilt this for you, and knowledge of character names on magic school bus? wow that really kilt it, i was like, "How corny is this guy." that was your downfall, was the corniness of your verse. But i respect the personal on his name. That was a good effort. Just a very corny verse.

And p dizzle-nice verse, great use of multi's, and nice flowing structure, a good read from start to finish. Moderate punchlines, but i think we both know it doesn't take much for this guy. I liked your verse, you had superior flow, structure, content, so i gave you this one.

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Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

wack battle
at least vicious tried to make his goos even though he had some played rhymes
dizzle gets this win becasue has better punches and personals had ok structure too

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Voted For: Vicious Beast

Aight dis is how it is
Kid Pdizzle had some great lines
ok opener good structure
and nice wordplay
Vicious had an ok verse too Like dat snoop dog line nice one
It was kinda short compared to P-Dizzles though
Next time dont put spaces in between ur lines
even though it was a short drop I still saw some good
punchlines
Im gonna give dis to Beast I was bout to vote for P-Dizzle but I liked Beast punchlines
no beef though

Voted For: Vicious Beast

Nice battle
Kid P-DIZZLE was hittin him hard
Nice multis and over all flow Ur structure was also good too
U had a long verse but u were syin pretty much the same stuff
Beast I was likin ur vers too
Good structure and nice wordplay
I also saw some punchlines
but ur verse was a little short
But it was still good
v/Beast

Aight, uppin' for more votes people, don't be shy.

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Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

oooo shit dizzle stomped him haha jeeeeez i'm sittin here laughing , thats amazing , the word play " you a vicious beast? like a monster? oh i get it - you came out of the closet" that has the makings of one of the funniest lines i have heard in a while , you took his name and played off of it and used things that went along with the vibe of the rhyme , nice length, :vicious beast: you need to lengthen your raps and get a little bit more personal but all it all i'm gonna go with dizzle



vote// dizzle


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Voted For: The Kid P-Dizzle

P-Dizzle - you had some pretty good shit in there...some forced rhyming but I saw good concepts you just didnt form some of them well. you had some nice multis that actually flowed instead of sounding like you forced them out. Nothing really stunning but you had a nice flow to it and it was a good battle verse

Vicious Beast - after I read the first bar I knew you were gonna lose...mad basic...forced rhyming... this is not hate at all so I dont wanna see you go hate vote on one of my battles out of spite or some shit Im jsut saying...nothing in there that was good...read the tutorials and keep elevating. youll get better.

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