Check it

I stand still inbetween on Fair Land, drop you Where u Stand With Bare Hands
Hit you so hard that you'd think i got Bear Hands to Tear Man
To Shreds n Peices, The Led Completes My tasks coz i'm being Fed By Demons
I Offend niggas that can't Accept my Defense, I will leave yo Chest Deleted
I'll Take you out the game like you Fouled Out for tryna Wild Out
Your motha fuckin flow runs on batteries nigga, yo Style's Out
Bow Down, I stay high, Around Clouds, and piss rain into niggas Foul Mouths
I'm Town Bound, Around Hounds bigger than Bow Wow, u be Around Clowns
Like a Circus, your Life is Wortless, I can't Find a Purpose, I Observe Shit,
Why would any of you Guys Deserve This, my motha fuckin Mind is Perfect,
Unorthadox, I'm like "The Thing" from The Fantastic Four, Ofcourse I Rock
The type to Torture Cops and throw them off of Sea Boards and Docs
I'm the Best with the Wordplay, You niggas tryna Test in the Worst Way
Hit you in the Chest when the Burns Spay
Leavin you with a Dented Cap, Spittin Facts, In a Lac, Sippin Yak
Fuck Will Smith! At night we'll come to your door with the real Men In Black
nigga, we can go tit for tat...

nice shit sonic i liked it

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sonic yer a big pimp lol you rap the best prob in rb you should get a mic unless you dont like yer voice lol liek me i hafe to be fast to liek my voice its so deep lol but ya man 9/10 great shit
Flow: 8/10
wordplay: 9/10
punchlines: 9/10
thats the best ive seen from you and the best ive seen on rb but check my shit out im gettin better everyday and every time im on rb readin your stuff ight check my shit out my freestyle ight !~!peace out!~!

freestyle here it is i just made it 30 sec

some people on rb might think that im a wannabe/
but they dont kno me as a crazyballa in my town/.
some people say that i can take them down with my hardcore nouns/
so think of me as a fast spittin crazy mutha fucka/.
cuz im white and dont call people my nukka/
cuz liek i said i aint no wannabe so you betta see me/.

thanx all ya'll, i really appreciate it..