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Old 09-04-04, 03:25 PM   #1
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i need to feel like this one was mine[at least tonight]

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i need to feel like this was mine
i'll roll this one over tonight
i'll give the chance,
but give it up for rock and roll dreams
if you let me go i'll come back and do my part
lets goslow and steady
i'll take your hand if your ready
we can walk that mile
right before the sun sets
dont worry about tomorrow
lets focus on now
before the dawn we'll get a second chance
but dont trust the morning
because you could be alone
and the questions
all in a bundle of roses
that i'll leave , so you can retrace your steps
but i'll let you know i'll wait on your backstep
in that yard, with the swing and the big maple tree
its crazy to think how far we've come
but pretty soon we'll move on
your always on the run
and i'm always ready to go
well we'll get bored, and lose track of the nights
but something about the start will always stay in my mind
rock and roll tonight
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Old 09-04-04, 05:15 PM   #2
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I was feelin dat.....nothing really wrong wit it exept there were very few rhymin words
but other than that it was some tight shit............PLEASE hook it up wit a reaction on dis shit....http://community.rapverse.com/showt...233.........P.S. i would like to collab. on some tight shit wit you cause im feelin ya style........PM me if you down..............Peayce
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Old 09-04-04, 10:50 PM   #3
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nice one man........ keep doin yo thang...
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Old 09-06-04, 06:09 PM   #4
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that was hot i am going to suggest you get poet of the month or what ever, you never fail in droppin tyte stuff
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Old 09-06-04, 06:22 PM   #5
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thanks still uppin
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Old 09-08-04, 06:26 PM   #6
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i like this poem too man, you keep spittin em out, you have a nack for this shit, nice work......1
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