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Old 08-20-04, 11:32 PM   #1
DrasticMeasureZ
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DrasticMeasureZ vs upfront

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Old 08-20-04, 11:41 PM   #2
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DrasticMeasureZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-20-04 11:41 PM.
 
Old 08-21-04, 12:53 PM   #3
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Old 08-21-04, 01:16 PM   #4
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im so0 sick wen i spit i should be sent to a docta/
ill take s0o many shots at ya head u b thinkin its socca/

s0o in order ta win u betta take drastic measurez/
cuz i come poppin off wit my fist i aint a big fan of beretas/

u aint no pimp nigga u relentless/
my dick deals wit mo mouths than a fuckin dentist/
ima b like donald trump and drop u like an apprentice/
i can keep on goin im sumthin like a run on sentence/

i gotta confident futa mus b cuz my cocky past/
ill put more holes in ya face than a hockey mask/
u should jus give up mayne u gunna make a fool ouuta yo ass/
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Old 08-21-04, 01:29 PM   #5
DrasticMeasureZ
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im "ill wit punches" like "open wounds" on "knuckles of mental patients"//
your jaw will "drop so far off" like ur "blood cells" were never "related"//

ill inject "methylamine gas" into ur blood stream "putting u to sleep"//
the "oxygen" u breath will "devour your cells" leavin u "six feet deep"// (if they mix they will turn to fire)

my "rhymes" are "HIV positive" thats why theyre so "ill"//
theyll "distort" your "white blood cells" makin u have "graphic horrors to kill"// (HIV kills white blood cells)

ill "blast" u in your "head" givin ur "brain" a sound resemblin a "lisp"// (retarded)
u winnin dis battle is "luda" without the "cris"// (luda means crazy)

take ya "picture" up close so i can get a good "vision"//
grab it, swallow it whole, gag my self, then "spit an image"//
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Old 08-21-04, 04:44 PM   #6
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[b] a bit of a crap verse but its only the opening[\b]
im "ill wit punches" like "open wounds" on "knuckles of mental patients"//
your jaw will "drop so far off" like ur "blood cells" were never "related"//
[b] thats 1 was ok a bit of a good flow but still weak [\b]
ill inject "methylamine gas" into ur blood stream "putting u to sleep"//
the "oxygen" u breath will "devour your cells" leavin u "six feet deep"// (if they mix they will turn to fire)
[b]better verse better flow that was better dude[\b]
my "rhymes" are "HIV positive" thats why theyre so "ill"//
theyll "distort" your "white blood cells" makin u have "graphic horrors to kill"// (HIV kills white blood cells)
[b]much better got some good punches in there (best verse) [\b]
ill "blast" u in your "head" givin ur "brain" a sound resemblin a "lisp"// (retarded)
u winnin dis battle is "luda" without the "cris"// (luda means crazy)
[b]o come on bck to verse 1 crap weak man [\b]
take ya "picture" up close so i can get a good "vision"//
grab it, swallow it whole, gag my self, then "spit an image"//
my vote gose to drasticmeasurez just weak battle both of ya man come on that was crap
v/ drasticmeasurez
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Old 08-21-04, 04:45 PM   #7
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return the faout in my battle agaist blackmigik plz
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Old 08-21-04, 05:43 PM   #8
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DrasticMeasureZ took this one...i feel he had better flow, better personals, and better punches, his structure was good and he had good wordplay....upfront not bad good flow and shit but didn't come as hard as DrasticMeasureZ

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Old 08-21-04, 05:52 PM   #9
PayDay
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yo this was an aight battle...ima give u my vote cause it was just overall better to me...u were creative and hade punches as well as some good multies...it flowed as well as made sense...so my vote goes to drastic...gud one homie
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Old 08-21-04, 06:37 PM   #10
DrasticMeasureZ
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Uppin People Dont Sleep On Dis Shit
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Quote:
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Very fucking Nice man, deep shyt, Ima nominate ya for Best poet.

Uppin this for drastic....10/10.....NICE SHYT MAN keep it up.


SEE THAT EMPIRE WERD~!

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OUT NOW-THE SLEEP & THE DREAM
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Old 08-21-04, 08:35 PM   #11
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drastic,Im not sure who U are completly but I have a damn good idea.Just by what name U called me.PM me back dogg I already sent U one.
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Old 08-21-04, 08:40 PM   #12
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breakdown
punhes=dm
meata=dm
multis=dm
flow=dm
begin=dm
end=dm
/v/= dm now plz return tha favor with an honest vote on ma battle againest big bonks
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Old 08-21-04, 08:55 PM   #13
DrasticMeasureZ
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Uppin In Dis Battle Put It In Closed
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Originally Posted by Wreckage
Very fucking Nice man, deep shyt, Ima nominate ya for Best poet.

Uppin this for drastic....10/10.....NICE SHYT MAN keep it up.


SEE THAT EMPIRE WERD~!

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COMING SOON-GODS BETRAYL
OUT NOW-THE SLEEP & THE DREAM
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Old 08-21-04, 09:43 PM   #14
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Drastic wins this battle barely only bcuz of vocab. The strucutre was pretty stretched and all those explanations within the spit really fucks of the flow of ya rhymes and the connnections were kind of stretched put ur explanations at the end if u have to but u had some good punches worked in there tho. simplify some of ur punches so there easier to read or chop them down or somethin n u'll b str8
upfront had a good spit too but while drastic was too complicated up front was too simple his structure was good and punches were ok but vocab was pretty simple so just up on that
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