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Old 08-05-04, 06:32 AM   #1
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Its Long, I Was Mad Wen I Rote Dis, Tell Me Wat U Think

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yo dese gurls r crazy i was goin wit kelly, but they all pissed me off one day n this is wat i got, its long as fuck but if u read it ull undastand, let me get feedback, n fuck da hataz



yo how far do i gota go?, shit u act like i love u hoe, shit let me say1 thing befo i go, if it was a choice between death to go wit u ifd pick up da gun n blo,
yo how can i predcit a bitch will still have dose confused brain cell, yo da fights started sum1 ring da bell,
fuck da bithc here lets go for a walk well talk n wen were done ill stalk rip yo ass up faster den da incridble hulk,
lets take a second to reckon i beckoned n i started fukin up yo lower section u wana leave me stressin? time to learn yo lesson, wheres are connection?,
thought u was guna show me affection? Bitch stop turnin away n pay attention, did u jus hear wat i mentioned?,
first let me take that skirt cmon bitch imma show u how to flirt i promise it wont hurt, well not for me , here take off yo shirt,
i dint say nuttin oo dose r my knifes used for cuttin oo dose vidoe tapes r of me n yo frends fuckin oo dat sound? dats heather in da bac suckin,
no who is she suckin? who cud it b?, i no wana no who it is? well shit it aint me, he's a frend of mine heres a hint they jus tried for da 3rd time,
its a shame i no but wat can i do? imma a guy who wants to get a gun n bullet play wit da trigga n pull it n put it through u,
oo im sry u dint think i was mentally challenged?, u aint good at fuckin somehow i sexually managed,
i filmed u on accident well wait no it wasnt, now dis sounds fucked up doesnt it?,
dats jsu da begginin u wana here da rest, naw da last parts da best,
remember wen un walked in on me n jakie n u screamed, n then u went home n had dreams,
u were jelous well as it seemeed, well guess wat u can engrave on her grave rest in peace,
afta u came in i got out of her n went runnin for u, i tried tellin u i enjoy rapein n cuttin whores 2,
but u wudnt listin so i was pissed n i got in da room n got kised wit da same lips dat were between my hips n prolly ben all ova dicks,
so i was mad n a slapped occured i was reasured i wudnt get caught so she screamed n fought,
n we walked to Bri's house went in da pool n went for a quick dip, 2 went in 1 came out yo sum jus got murded oo shit,
think ne 1 cares naw i doubt it shit i called da cops they came, i ran n i put it on alex he was framed n dats how i got my fame,
he sends threatinin lettas i rite back wit a smile on my face n try to cope , n i wanred him to watch out n dont drop da soap,
bri was kinda scared but i comforterd her betta den steve cuda eva done, steve waitin for a kiss n in 1 day i got some,
tells u sumthin dont it? shit crazy shit, i jus neva really cud get how she ended up wit a brusied eye n sayin she tripped,
oo wait i remember clearly, she came near me, sayin she dint fear me, i wanred her but she dint hear me, n guess eh ditn no bout da bat i carry,
she came closa i told steve to hold ha but he was mad cryin like a bithc sayin u stole ha so he let go of ha n she came by me so i showed ha,
n sed if u eva say ne thin i mite jus go upside yo hed, den al of a sudden her nose startin drippen red,
heather was there but she was to busy n nodded to go ahed, well mayb she was noddin cus she was sukin off did dude n dint realize ha otha frend was ded,
STOP STOP STOP wat r u talkin bout? uhhh shit i duno bitch shut up (SMACK) now listen,
so da nexr day at schoo we was talkin n she was kinda nervous, we went into da janitors closet n told ha to jerk it,
but then she startin nibblin n hurt it, but it was all good shit dint evn have to pay wat great service!,
so lata dat nite called ha up sed meet me at darien, she sed she dint want to go there agen,
so i drove by her hous en picked bri up, den we went to da store for a pick me up,
rode fast to da park it was dark but then she began to start evrythin started spinnin all of a sudden i saw clouds of white n naked women,
i thought i was in heavin for a minute, came down to earth n i fuckin hit it,
she moanin of course she did, but i rammed to hard n she was blledin eternally i ran n hid,
she was goin in circles n she wudnt stop screamin n yellin, i was afrad she wud run to da cops n start tellin,
so i grabbed her by da hed n slammed it to da ground, 5 mintutes lata u dint hear a sound,
there was a pile of blood and a curhsed skull on da pavement, so theres anoutha R.I.P on anoutha ingravement,
c bitch dont get me pisssed off i thought that u new, for evry dude u flirt anoutha part of yo body gets beat blu,
so now ur left wit only 1 mo frend well 2 but lareun really doens tlike u,
so its u n heather rdie till yall die shit wat a coinicdance yall last ride is tonite,
o shit wait heather ded i forgot to let u no, supposdanly they bfound a 12 inche blade stuck in her pussy hole,
wastn me wait yea it was, well we was both buzzed, n she caused such a fuss cmon gurl it was a must,
mike was there but he was to fucked up to stop me, dude sat rite there and watched me,
so now ur left n alone r u scareed?, yo remember that whole kiss thing? i was dared,
jus thought u shud no considerein ur bout to die, naw gurl dont worry dont cry,
imma use yo body wen im done wit it, imma cut it off yo body n use it to make linin,
n wen they barrie u imma put it in it, so then evry1 can point at me n say he did it,
ill run flip em da bird, say i did it yea u no wat u jus herd,
n wen da cops come imma lock da doors and shut out da lights,
ill have abomb strapped to me push da button n bam goodnite.
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Old 08-05-04, 06:36 AM   #2
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holy fuck long but iight and tight well some bits.. nice anyways
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Old 08-05-04, 06:38 AM   #3
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thx for da feedback Kurse, yo man lookin for more feedback
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Old 08-05-04, 06:46 AM   #4
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it was wack your structure was fuckin bad elevate
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Old 08-05-04, 06:57 AM   #5
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yo ass must love hatin, yo ass post sum shit up here prolly guna b whack as fuck but ne way, leme get sum more feedback on dis
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Old 08-05-04, 07:00 AM   #6
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virtue is not a thug he admits here...

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revoke is my boy and no i aint a thug


but continues poppin shit dont u hate hataz?lmmao good long drop soundin like eminem's-kim remix or sumtin...lol u crazy peace
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Old 08-05-04, 07:03 AM   #7
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yea man hataz is fuked up , but yea dawg thx for da feedback, naw dat aint da remxi to dat ill post dat shit up sum otha time now dat crazy shit but uh ne way, thx for da feedback yall, now tell me wat else yall think
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Old 08-10-04, 02:50 PM   #8
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yo leme get sum more feedback read it try to get it cmon dawg let me no wat u think!
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Old 08-13-04, 01:01 AM   #9
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leme get sum more feedback on this rite here its lon but its koo leme no wat i gota doi
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Old 08-23-04, 10:18 PM   #10
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leme get more feedback on this rite here i wana no wat u guys think!!!!!!
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