U make the pace when your might is strong ..
& I make mistakes but can't go back to right a wrong
and i like to long that my introspect advances
cuz in real life I've never got no second chances
it wont ever stop for glancin`.. God isn't taking shit
the time don't go fast or slow its what u make of it
plus im passed the show of lying or cheating
cuz it gets me nowhere except trying to reason
id just die on my knees N.. not deal what i got
I've always tried to stay true to my feelings.. or not
skins peeling & rots.. Not yet, when the time comes
i`ll have family & friends, a life to remind of . . .
so deal me amends.. seen with the plainest men
& be proud of myself, just the same as them ..
altho i've grown hopeless, amiss; the notion exists
that i could trade places, not be a loner in this..
possibility of a different future pretends & it ends
& i struggle to recapture its appeal again & again

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yo that was tight fow and structure were hot... doope peice mayne return da favor...

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Nothing special here,no dazzling wordplay or incredible punches but the topic was ok i guess and the flow was aight.Nothing too too special about this piece just keep elevating and stop making pointless threads in hip hop talk.

SUCC MACOKK 1st off u a dumb ass nigga apparently, cause u'ont kno wtf ur talkin about. It ain't possed ta have no punches...DUMBFUCK. Personally I thought it was a pretty nice drop. It had ok wordplay, nice flow, and good structure. Overall nice drop cuzzin. keep doin ya thing nigga aight -1-

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