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Old 09-06-04, 06:47 PM   #1
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Arrow Freestyle Diss

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Freestyle Diss

Dont diss me in cypher
You not mad, just hyper
You dont wanna start shit
And dont think Im gonna let you lick up on my tit
I wont lick yo dick
I wont suck yo dick
Its sour and soggy like a pickle
You tryen to sell beats - They worth less than a nickle
So back off - You just tryen to elavate
Yo pussy get yo ass beat so dont hate
Think your a good textcee
You obviously neva met me!
Now you know Dime
And you know her ill rhyme.


My second spit ever. Got a little better but over all I know its kinda off in flow.


My Link:
Open Mic By: Keen2B
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=147159
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Old 09-06-04, 06:50 PM   #2
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no the flows pretty good but you sound like yer a herb and that is what you are lol
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Old 09-07-04, 09:04 AM   #3
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lol u fukin sux lol just keep practicin ya rhymes n battles... n maybe u could check out da tutorials lol coz u need it!!!!
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Old 09-07-04, 10:29 AM   #4
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Yea, That Wasnt The Best Peice I Seen...

An WHO Are You Dissin?

Dissin Random People Like That Is Garbage Man...

Have More Meanin To Ya Rhymes..
An ADD Punches An Make Them Humouress...

U Need ELEVATION, An ALOT Of It..

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