|
|
|
|
| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
09-05-04, 10:58 PM
|
#1
|
||||
|
Hit Dreams-premere single
IP: 0ABC 464B
Hit Dreams
slow and steady wins the race-they say but the truth is fast fowardin your pace lands you in 1st place- no matter how much you're adored-they will always trace back to what you did before you had fans crankin up the base you must stay real to what you say in your tracks what you back in your words fans believe they are the facts don't front and you will land yourself in front these rappers claimin they stunt, makin themselves resemble a dunce why reduce these fraction MC's- got beats from producers but are disabled lyrically- so somehow they park in the handicap spot on rap- 106 calim hits from only dancin and rappers throwin up stacks of money- runnin from a single track-all collabs in fact never did 3 full verses without needing a back no rap is nor love nor hate, its basically what you interpritate the state or the game and how its played, the levels layered in ways that basically only count how many records and in how many days __________________________________________________ ___________ (chorus) __________________________________________________ _____________ hands down i'm bound to get you up when my sound played it be stuck in your headphones for days may sound like i was boost, but for man it is the truth i got locks i'm my words that's for real how its tight no hype it was proved-so choose to lose or miss out on a soon to be known-ProV was toned before he was grown i write all my lyrics that way i claim my songs as my own keep a strong grip on all around you because you'll miss it when its gone like grass is always greener on the other side right? but most times the other has forest and you be steppin in lime so ge t your pen in paper and get to writen them rhymes don't settle for wack lines buckle down and be the man on the cover of time __________________________________________________ _____________ (chorus) __________________________________________________ _____________ now that's it man_i only want a hit man_i wanna be paid to spit mayn_ then maybe i can stop beggining every sentence with "i wish" then are you listnin? i'm tired of prentedin to be a jay or a knaye i wanna be there today and i wanna be paid, so why can't i be there anyway man i will stick with the best believe i won't let nobody get in my way not even a roadblock its more like wordblock- i'm still undiscovered like i blinded mr shurlock- did i miss a verb stop? because i'm not recieving a action from record companies even after the mixtapes that i'm passin constantly harassin the record comany till he finnaly dashes if you here this i say thank you-even if you were once my opponet just me being recognised is all i ever wanted..... __________________________________________________ _____________
__________________
The Competition
 |
||||
 
|
|
|
09-05-04, 11:00 PM
|
#2
|
|||||||
|
STROBE's Favorite Rapper
|
IP: 5671 DBDD
clear your fucking mail box so i can pm you bout my avatar
__________________
Overall Rapverse Record Including Leagues 94-29
R.I.P RAPVERSE
|
|||||||
|
|
|
|
09-05-04, 11:01 PM
|
#3
|
||||
|
IP: 28AD 5545
o its cleared
and ps. the minimum size of that site is at Least 200 by 200 so it can't be a avy flow2crazy made mine
__________________
The Competition
|
||||
|
|
|
|
09-05-04, 11:46 PM
|
#4
|
|||||
|
Blow Me
|
IP: 7D7A FF3D
good drop... but i wish i could see what the chorus was but the verses were pretty ill good job...
__________________
My Lines Are ILL yo |
|||||
|
|
|
09-05-04, 11:47 PM
|
#5
|
||||
|
IP: 28AD 5545
^ yea i made a couple combinations for a chorus
bout 3 i felt but i couldnt decide to make this like a "lose yourself" shit but i chose to make it my original peice
__________________
The Competition
|
||||
|
|
|
|
09-06-04, 12:33 AM
|
#6
|
||||
|
who wants a hug????
|
IP: 5851 2C66
yeah mayn i agree i liek the drop alot, but i wish i could see the chorus, cuase taht was sick, nice job
|
||||
|
|
|
|
09-06-04, 01:35 AM
|
#7
|
||||
|
IP: 9EF2 7F0D
^thanx
uppin fo some more crits
__________________
The Competition
|
||||
|
|
|
|
09-07-04, 08:09 PM
|
#8
|
||||
|
IP: 28AD 5545
yo can i plz get some somo crits >?????
mo people doin open mics then givin oppinions
__________________
The Competition
|
||||
|
|
|
|
09-07-04, 08:13 PM
|
#9
|
||||
|
$Thug Life$
|
IP: 7C6F 690C
nice man but i thought it was like a novel...
__________________
OutLawz
*(`'·.¸(`'·.¸**¸.·'´)¸.·'´)*
«´¨`·..* G_$peed *..·´¨`» *(¸.·'´(¸.·'´**`'·.¸)`'·.¸)*   _____________________
Hot Songz
|
||||
|
|
|
09-07-04, 08:38 PM
|
#10
|
||||||
|
Middle Weight
|
IP: 005F B7E2
Some cats flow fake and show great// sympathy for wimpy
Rhymes and skimpy lines// wear disguise and share lies// with empty Minds, write tight then hold to a bright light// to test how fresh The rhymes are, the flavor is my behavior what yall suggest? |
||||||
|
|
|
09-07-04, 09:26 PM
|
#11
|
||||
|
IP: 3240 794D
??^^ wasnt a crit mayn
lol anyway it was ok but the struc. was really off 4 real made it look herbish but next time don't freepost iight? ~1~ luv
__________________
The Competition
|
||||
|
|
|
|
09-08-04, 09:50 PM
|
#12
|
||||
|
IP: 3240 794D
uppin again
come on i'll return the favor if you know me then you know i return favors so plz jus give a honest crit and don't play follow the leader
__________________
The Competition
|
||||
|
|
|
|
09-10-04, 06:58 PM
|
#13
|
||||
|
IP: 0825 899A
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
damn do i need to talk about guns to get crits? damn
__________________
The Competition
|
||||
|
|
|
|
09-10-04, 11:08 PM
|
#14
|
||||
|
Jumpin' Along
|
IP: C56C 93CC
damn this was a nice drop...
but i couldnt see the chorus but i guess everyone else couldnt either... you had mad feelings in it...son and nice imagery... i really liked the way youe set it up nice.. rhyme sceme.... overall son this was a very nice drop..and i couldnt have expected less from you nice...verse home boi... good shyt
__________________
-Im God-
 3 Dq's dont get it twisted  -An Origional Rv member since 2003 ..Still think you can beat me? - |
||||
|
|
|
 |
| Thread Tools | Search this Thread |
| Display Modes | |
|
|
Linear Mode
