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09-10-04, 04:26 PM | #1 | |||||||
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told by a man scorned in life
alls i got from my girl is 'negativity' and strife i waisted alot a time on a girl i thought was going to be mine the hoe fell short of a nickle and niggas still think shes a dime damn dawg i should've seen it comin' 'william told' but i didnt hear the drummer drum'n i have my head phones on but i still hear nigga's whispering ova my song "nigga must be dumb to let that go" but they dont realize she ruins life slow i relapsed and she was my cancer sat there and devowerd my heart and i let her in the paper today"young man died at the age 24" "for givin' his heart to a retired whore" disconnect me from this matrix,i cant take it no more as i sit here and watch my pride fall through the floor day-um dawg this all seemed so real heart shattering thats all i could feel all the pieces cleaned up by a maid at the beginning all i was trying to do was get laid
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09-13-04, 08:29 PM | #2 | |||||||
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