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10-14-04, 09:53 AM | #1 | |||||
GoD LiKe
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Earth: The UnEdited Version
IP: E267 1347
so many words cut out from history of the nations
information we readin' is like "truth's abbreviations" even the Bible bas changed from hands to hands God's PLANS for men looks like an AGENDA of men's demand human's legs been "enhance" to "stand" the test-of-lifetime with doctor degrees, the balance of Earth has-to-decline life is light, evading death reflects-your-fright's-signs but breath of the mirrors distinglish less-of-the-shine as we explore rest-of-the-mind, grows abuse of-our-wisdom if you inspect-on-the-crimes, they throw you off-the-system bottom of the food chain, marked by racial classes some store clerk mother with her husband blasted by some racist bastards wearin' "protector of the city" badges and passed-his 4 kids to a single mother living hazards and this case is simlars by the masses, we grieving like Pi, its "a problem in a circle", we know the reason exploits, bribary and prejudice all covered in and the blanket is the corrupted government so now i ask you to take off your colored sunglasses and buy the ones with prescription to see the hazards slavery, racism and selfishness got us torn we can fix it, without U N I we can't spell UNIFORM all wars are civil, coz we murderin' our own-kind i'm the right leg you the left, we be "trippin" till we combined erase all the last names, coz we ONE family i want to see brothers and sisters holding hands in harmony focus on God instead of money men-worshipped build the next version of Earth that doesn't require censorship There will ber a part 2 to this Earth 2 a new Version
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10-14-04, 12:19 PM | #2 | |||||
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"like Pi, its a problem in a circle", so true."now i ask you to take off your colored glasses and buy the prescription ones to see the hazards"..one of the best lines in this piece.....and the ending was great.....i was feelin this piece, foreal, all the deeply rooted issues now, damn, we need more drops like this, especially now, excellent content and some dope metaphors and multies too, very well written, i got the shivers from this.....thank you
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10-14-04, 06:59 PM | #3 | |||||
GoD LiKe
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IP: CEC2 D817
Thanks Girl,
I just love writing, dont care what about, If i feel like writing in the point of view of a dog, im sure i could make a dope poem and call it a dogs day ,,,,, But yeah thanks their FLuid, and nice job on that collabo in open mics
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11-29-04, 05:06 PM | #4 | |||||
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IP: 947A 2011
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