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AutoMATIK™ 5 100.00%
Trojan 0 0%
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Old 09-10-04, 09:16 PM   #1
Immense
 
From: uk
AutoMATIK™ vs Trojan

IP: 50ED A539

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Old 09-10-04, 09:18 PM   #2
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Trojan has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-10-04 09:18 PM.
 
Old 09-10-04, 09:42 PM   #3
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AutoMATIK™ has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-10-04 09:42 PM.
 
Old 09-10-04, 09:47 PM   #4
Immense
 
From: uk
IP: 50ED A539

like hustlin four leaf clovers,this bitch pushin his luck...*
his rhymes could be given 'ass' like j-lo and still not look good...
to go up against me is crazy...ya must be one of these slowly risin emcess...
try to act BIG,and like fat americans..youll be tastin were the MACS be...**
this bitch couldnt submit a decent verse..even if i had him in a throat hold...***
bought his own c-d out the store...but his music still didnt get sold...
like sheep..ya minds followin the paths of other vet writers...
ya desperately tryna stop beef wit me.....like animal rights fighters...****
if ya lyrics composed music...theyd be producing they own collapse...
spin this fags head like a roof fan...leave him til his joints are snapped...

*clover leafs are suppose to be lucky..pushin means hustlin

**big an mac....mcdonalds...mac is a gun also...

***throat hold is a wrestling move tht causes opponent to submit

****bitch dont wanna cause beef wit me.....animal rights..savin the cows n shit
 
Old 09-10-04, 09:50 PM   #5
AutoMATIK™
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From: Chapter 4
IP: 23CC 11AC

From the blazin Barrow of my throat I’ll ‘slay this fool’
Face it dude, ill drag you across the street, until the ‘pavement’s smooth’
Wit spits that’ll leave yo rhymes beveled ,now who can ‘believe yo barz?’
You’ll ‘leave wit scars’ and the world can watch Trojan get poppin ‘between the walls’
I drop so much heat im ‘blastin satan’ so step and imma have dem ‘clappers watin’
Get relapsed when I ‘make shift’ and leave you wit mo pumps then ‘asthma patients’
Who can step to the dude … Im known as god, to make yo life ‘spiritually hectic’
Have rhymes that leave you *Lyrically Infected* when my verbs get you ‘mentally infected’

not really feelin myself right now ...
 
Old 09-10-04, 09:54 PM   #6
TURBAN
Banned: Cheating
 
From: MPLS,MN
IP: 95EB 880F

Voted For: AutoMATIK™

yea u a tad bit off , but u still stole it ... u actually rhymed ha
trojan u had a lil bit not to much rhym'n and the rhymn u had wasnt all that fantasitc

punches//auto
personals//auto
metas//auto
structure//trojan
... what ever is left auto

vote// automatik

no hate to trojan
 
Old 09-10-04, 10:40 PM   #7
Sik Wit It
 
From: Florida
IP: 258C A279

Voted For: AutoMATIK™

..Im Votin For AutoMATIK, Cuz His Punches Were Harder, Flow Was Aight, Structure Pretty Decent, Both Of There Rhymes Were Okay But AutoMATIK Came A Lil Harder With It Tho..
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Old 09-11-04, 04:37 PM   #8
Abraxas
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From: 305
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Voted For: AutoMATIK™

gotdamn ... ya both verse were iight
Auto: ya lines were iight good verse overall but there were fuckign strecthed like hell which gets ya strucutre out so id give strucutre and flow to trojan ya had the punches though trojan got the personals um next time keep ya shit structred and get a good flwo with ya verse but nice overall
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Old 09-13-04, 05:31 PM   #9
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From: $.W Detroit
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like hustlin four leaf clovers,this bitch pushin his luck...*
his rhymes could be given 'ass' like j-lo and still not look good...
1/10
to go up against me is crazy...ya must be one of these slowly risin emcess...
try to act BIG,and like fat americans..youll be tastin were the MACS be...**
2/10
this bitch couldnt submit a decent verse..even if i had him in a throat hold...***
bought his own c-d out the store...but his music still didnt get sold...
2/10
like sheep..ya minds followin the paths of other vet writers...
ya desperately tryna stop beef wit me.....like animal rights fighters...****
3/10
if ya lyrics composed music...theyd be producing they own collapse...
spin this fags head like a roof fan...leave him til his joints are snapped...
3/10

Mmmk intresting first u need 2 elevate and come with more clever punches~Wasent that bad but u can use some complexity and high vocab sumtin that seems a lil more complicated when u drop,Ya punches were ok u can jus base your self off these so focus on better and more complicated punches and Wordplay


From the blazin Barrow of my throat I’ll ‘slay this fool’
Face it dude, ill drag you across the street, until the ‘pavement’s smooth’
2/10
Wit spits that’ll leave yo rhymes beveled ,now who can ‘believe yo barz?’
You’ll ‘leave wit scars’ and the world can watch Trojan get poppin ‘between the walls’
2/10
I drop so much heat im ‘blastin satan’ so step and imma have dem ‘clappers watin’
Get relapsed when I ‘make shift’ and leave you wit mo pumps then ‘asthma patients’
4/10
Who can step to the dude … Im known as god, to make yo life ‘spiritually hectic’
Have rhymes that leave you *Lyrically Infected* when my verbs get you ‘mentally infected’
7/10

Hmm pretty nice drop wasent tha best ive seen from u but shit im tryin 2 find myself righ now also.Ya wordplay started off average but towards the end kicked up better.Complexity was ok ya structure was heavely stretched minus points for those.Punches was were alright some hella played but other were clever

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Old 09-13-04, 05:46 PM   #10
Immense
 
From: uk
IP: E813 21B7

am gettin ko'ed but at least to someone decent...haha....uppin this...finish it off........
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Old 09-15-04, 06:47 PM   #11
AutoMATIK™
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IP: 23CC 11AC

uppin ...
 
Old 09-15-04, 09:14 PM   #12
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This was feedback posted for AutoMATIK™

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hmm closer battle than some ive seen.

punches- Auto
flow- Auto
multis- Auto
multas- Auto
personals- Auto
Word play- tie

When i say it wuz closer than some ive seen isnt sayin much. Auto u had good punches, and flow.

Trojan yout verse wuz ok. Auto's wuz just better. Work on harder punches and personals.

Auto:
"From the blazin Barrow of my throat I’ll ‘slay this fool’
Face it dude, ill drag you across the street, until the ‘pavement’s smooth’" nice multi+punch

Trojan:
"this bitch couldnt submit a decent verse..even if i had him in a throat hold...***
bought his own c-d out the store...but his music still didnt get sold..." nice wordplay, and punch. if u had more of those you woulda won.

v/Auto if i could vote
 
Old 09-17-04, 11:55 AM   #13
AutoMATIK™
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IP: 23CC 11AC

you didnt vote ^ ... so uppin still
 
Old 09-17-04, 12:08 PM   #14
Logic The Goonie
I can rap and stuff.
 
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From: So. Killa Kali
IP: 7BE2 A0A1

Voted For: AutoMATIK™

trojan- wasnt really feelin ya punches, some of it didnt rhyme, that sort of stuff. you definatly have potetial to be good but you are far from it at this point.keep elevatin....5/10

auto- like u said it wasnt that good but good enuff for the win. punches were coo, wordplay was iight, structure was nice, just keep doin ya thing playa.....7/10

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