aight...this the first time i ever posted any writens apart from a battle...so dont hate...its bout a guy full of pain...made alot of mistakes....check it yaselfs...

GOD CREATED A MONSTA

ayo..am on the edge..one of them darin people...
like bustin clips vestless...and sharin needles...
ya despare,am lethal..some swear im evil...
kidnap ya wife..and suffercate her with clean film...
im like a monster in dis-quise..throw ma anger at gay guys...
leave ya wit fear in ya eyes...like a rapper wit stage fright...
growin up..badly beaten..nightmares while am sleepin...
its like theres nothin to live for..i just cant find a reason...
all this hanger thts inside..i try ma best to just hide...
but i find when im alone ill just break down and cry...cos im a monsta

chorus:
lethal...gone against god...deceitful...
a monsta..all feelins inside are evil...
full of hatred..no love..a human being gone wrong...
inside his head,all of this pain goin on so long...

ma hanger..ill cut up even just a guy tht stairs...
let him feel how i feel..wots its liked to be scared...
i aint scared of death..just in life itself...
strugglein for food,happiness,and to find me some wealth...
i see a monsta in ma soul..but i dont wanna be tht...
its like a slave on a slave ship...he dont wanna be black...
but hes proud of his colour..i aint pround of wot ive become...
only family tht i can trust..is the one i call 'gun'...
stayin on the run...laws got me labeled a danger...
knock on ma mamas door for help...she just calls me a stranger...cos am a monsta

chorus:
lethal...gone against god...hes deceitful...
a monsta..all the feelins tht he got inside are evil...
full of hatred..no love..a human being gone wrong...
inside his head,all of this pain goin on so long... hes a monsta

god must have created a monsta,cos thts all tht everyone sees...
i must be a bad person,cos thts all tht everyone believes...
or maybe its ma surroundings,the way ive been brought up...
the kids tht i hanged with...or the drugs tht i took...
never been showed no love...never been told i love you...
only been shouted in ma face..'i wish i never had you'...
dragged into a thug life..hustlin ma ass off to get by...
never meant to hurt nobody...especially tht little gurl in tht drive by...
so many mistakes..but tht one cost me ma life...
am sorry god..time to be a man..and go do ma time...
we all make mistakes,i swear i aint a monsta...

chorus:
lethal...gone against god...deceitful...
a monsta..all feelins inside are evil...
full of hatred..no love..a human being gone wrong...
inside his head,all of this pain goin on so long...god created human beings

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fuck u................
N class sic..........

only cuz u droped out for them bitches....

* no hate on the crew just ya crew members *

^^^u lil pussy ass bitch...i aint even in clas sic no more........they wernt doin shit.....so i dropped....

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ill battle u for ur crew....if i loose....ill drop from the site....if u loose....u pass your crew forum over bitch.....24 hour to drop...lets make it hot...........u down for it fag......

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uppin this piece of shit..............

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SAME HERE

WAS IN CLASSIC FOR A DAY AND WAS LIKE


YUCK

THIS PEICE WAS DESCENT><<<<<<

you should be more vivid with your use of words....
Other than that it was a solid drop

7.5/10

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Solid...some nice shit...fuckin' long though...nice work though. Definetly got some skill....peep my diss. Thanks.

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^^^^HAHA......cool...this was my first ever open mic and a vet says it was a solid decent drop.....thnx for advice aswell..... uppin this......

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damn...another vet likeing it...will check ya diss too....thnx g....uppin

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Im No Vet


Im A Wack Noob

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I am Here To Save You All

hmmmm...^^^LOL.........if u say sooooo.........lol

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LMFAO!

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lol................feedback yallll.................

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yeah, yeah, stop bitchin kids...............


the peice u dropped was aight, chorus was nice, wordplay was decent, 7/10...

keep em comin

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