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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
Da Point 0 0%
-EXPLICIT- 5 100.00%
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Old 09-26-04, 02:34 PM   #1
-EXPLICIT-
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Da Point vs -EXPLICIT-

IP: DB49 F2F2

Battle Rules:

10 Lines Max
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


^^ Better rules man..


Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 09-26-04 at 03:04 PM

Must drop verse in 20 minutes after check in.
 
Old 09-26-04, 02:39 PM   #2
-EXPLICIT-
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IP: DB49 F2F2

Better rules in this.. good luck
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Old 09-26-04, 02:46 PM   #3
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IP: CCAE A7E8

Da Point has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-26-04 02:46 PM.
 
Old 09-26-04, 02:47 PM   #4
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-EXPLICIT- has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-26-04 02:47 PM.
 
Old 09-26-04, 02:48 PM   #5
-EXPLICIT-
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IP: DB49 F2F2

Can’t make his own style so he tries to bite from One-Man-Band*
Can’t hook up with a chick, so he gets his sister to give him hand**
Yo rhymes are wack and bland.. Even dead people run from you***
Class-Sic merkin.. Kids so wack he got kicked from his last crew****
Nobody likes you.. No one Would give a fuck if you slit ya wrist
I insist ya do it jus cease to exist fuck it ill do it I just cant resist
Fuck this bitch like dead batteries ya rhymes don’t pack a punch
Kid acts tough as fuck..yet ya kno he rolls with the brady bunch *****
Fuck it.. imma put two holes in this herbs back like the number 8
Realize. picking up “fat chicks” is the only time you “carry weight”

* Tried to bite OMB’s font style..
** Has a sister.. pics were posted of the hoe somewhere
*** Avvy
**** Kicked outta Class-Sic
***** Acts tough all the time.. then jus gets merked..



Wrote this in the other battle thread.. but then i noticed the rules..
 
Old 09-26-04, 02:48 PM   #6
Effect
..::shut the fuck up::..
 
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IP: CCAE A7E8

Explict is everyones enemie his life an't even worth two pennies
he's embaressed by his name cause he was named at brith jenny
Stupid prick thinks he can rhyme sick but shit he's a flip
can't flip the script he justs trips and falls down 2 his last hip
what an asshole tellin me to slit wists go back to ya trashhole
just blow away and lands somewhere far like da north pole
Everytime you rhyme it's like your liein and mime wid no mind
you see explict everyone knows your a loser face it u act nine!
his birth was a curse and fuckin made his mummas womb burst
he thinks he's so kool but my rhymes will beat ya n slap ya first
 
Old 09-26-04, 02:50 PM   #7
-EXPLICIT-
E-1
 
IP: DB49 F2F2

Alright lets get some votes in hurrrr...
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Old 09-26-04, 03:26 PM   #8
Adam
 
From: Canada
IP: A0C8 44A9

Voted For: -EXPLICIT-

-EXPLICIT-....this was a solid drop, opened up with a dope opener with personals right off the start and a good punch. the whole verse kicked the shit outta Da point. Good flow, perfect structure, wicked punches, and personals everywhere...you knocked this guy out then whipped the floor with him...one sided battle definately.....fav line....

"Nobody likes you.. No one Would give a fuck if you slit ya wrist
I insist ya do it jus cease to exist fuck it ill do it I just cant resist "
...nice hard punch with some solid multis...overal verse 8.5/10 good drop


Da Point ... your drop wasn't bad but it was just weak....your birth name is jenny??? WEAK, plus spelling errors everywhere, it didn't even look like you cared about this battle, maybe thats why you lost so bad...? your structure and flow as good, but you didn't really have that intense of a vocab or anything and your punches just didn't hit to hard...you coulda came stronger, you act like your nine? fall on your hip...come on man...elevate..no hate....5/10..


v/ -EXPLICIT-

please drop an honest vote on this battle with good feedback...it keeps gettin re-opened....

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thank you
 
Old 09-26-04, 03:34 PM   #9
Scenario
..:Merking Mc's:..
 
IP: 666C F77E

Voted For: -EXPLICIT-

-Explicit-: U had more personals, punches were sorta hitting, not really any multi's, i like the meta's, structure was damn near flawless, good flow, ok opener, hot closer, i think the personals won it for u


Da Point: no hate but this sucked, good structure, good flow, but some of the rhymes sucked and it looked like u fed off his some how because of the slit ya wrists line, punches were hardly hitting, meta's were ok, expand ya vocab, elevate kid and use some personals


vote: Explicit


no hate, return the honest vote, battles are in my sig
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Old 09-26-04, 03:49 PM   #10
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IP: DB49 F2F2

Aight uppin this shit.....
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Old 09-26-04, 07:40 PM   #11
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IP: DB49 F2F2

Uppin this lets get it closed hurr
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Old 09-27-04, 07:06 AM   #12
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IP: DB49 F2F2

Uppin here.... lets get it closed...
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Old 09-27-04, 07:21 AM   #13
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This was feedback posted for -EXPLICIT-

IP: 5043 32F4

lol nice personals mann and Sinner dont feed off his rhymes just to help u out
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Old 09-27-04, 10:08 AM   #14
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IP: 4986 F47C

Uppin For Some Votes>.............................
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Old 09-27-04, 04:25 PM   #15
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IP: DB49 F2F2

Uppin for damn votes here... come on....
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