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thechosenone |
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0 | 0% |
J-Will |
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5 | 100.00% |
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J-Will vs thechosenone
IP: 1E2A 16F7
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6 - 20 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 10-07-04 at 08:25 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
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IP: 1E2A 16F7
TheChosenOne has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-04-04 08:30 PM.
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IP: 1E2A 16F7
lets do it
The games over i have ur moms bend over you aint know thechosenone and T.O.T taking over Jwill herb as nigga who wish he was as good as me but please u aint never goin to spit like me i'll leave u dead in the street cuz u was poppin off the mouth to much... u think ur tough but u be the one in school always geting beat up... u call ur self the problem but sucking niggaz dick is not how ur selve them i run through niggas like i run out of condoms ur bars are weak like a weak as album.. im done its a wrap |
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IP: 1E2A 16F7
J-Will has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-04-04 08:45 PM.
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IP: 1E2A 16F7
this is not my verse
From the start to the finish I'ma bark on contenders Wanna tarnish my image I can't promise forgiveness J-Will This is hot as it gets, your shit's not as intense My flow got 'em convinced, u dont know who u goin against i'll put ur face to the fence, why u spitten out garbage u aint making no sense Why you try'na critique this, don't take kindness for weakness Leave you behind the speakers, body minus some pieces Thechosenone got battles to lose , I got jaws to break You will never excel against me... measure the rate I got too much at stake I just follow my fate Annihilate and dominate and I ain't even try'na wait. u better change ur name nigga.....cuz u aint the one and stop biting and copying niggaz make up ur own son While you hang out, I bang out Make moves like shots rang out Wanna know, what my slang 'bout like the R.Kelly i aim for ur mouth and leave ur brains splatter on ur cough. Your chances are slim, makin' advances on J will While you, shootin' the breeze, I'm geting brains from girl You already know the outcome, so how come you doubt son? ("I'm goin' out by any means necessary" – Malcolm) This is not your, ordinary contender im numb 1 ur secodary Won this battle and u know it......... and i dont give a fuck wat the website... say if i ever meet u in real life i run up on u with a white sheet over my head like im the K.K.K |
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a.k.a Sonic
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IP: E198 D20B
Voted For: J-Will
J will had a much better verse.. way more extended, yet the quality was better too.. better punches, better flow, and structure.. it was a lot more entertaining to read. his lines were wittier.. the chosen one, you should of wrote more and tried to think of some wittier shit to say.. v/jwill RETURN THE FAVOR with an honest vote right here cuz, wun.. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=153028
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IP: 1E2A 16F7
we need some more votes
people start voting for who u think won this battle ... .... .. . . ..... ........................... |
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IP: 680D 1646
Voted For: J-Will
this one dfinitely goes to J-will the lines that decided it for me were: "Why you try'na critique this, don't take kindness for weakness Leave you behind the speakers, body minus some pieces" and "u better change ur name nigga.....cuz u aint the one and stop biting and copying niggaz make up ur own son" thechosenone's punches were corny, bothyour line were stretched at some lines but overall the winner would have to be J-Will |
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IP: 1E2A 16F7
good looking ...............
................ i still need more votes holla ta me |
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IP: 1E2A 16F7
ayo we needs some votes
.......... .......... thechosenone vs jwill tc1 in this muther fucker |
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Better than you..
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IP: 01C3 560C
Voted For: J-Will
aiight...decent battle....good luck to u both. chosen1- verse was really poor in my opinion. u need to work on structure so that most of your sentences are pretty similar in length. try to expand your vocab and use better words in battling and u should do better. everyone has potential mate but u gotta strenghten ya skills....only comes with practice. no hate this is just my honest opinion. J-Will - this was a good drop mate i liked ya verse. no question you took it out with ease. good punnches, structure was a lil bit 'iffy' in some spots but its good enough for this battle. decent wordplay and good vocab. Vote - JWILL
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Emcees depart, like rubin carter my hurricane left u scarred… Like a spiked bat grammatical bar, like a wonderland drug… Tumble - ing like a flagon of rum and 2 blunts, like the funk baby… |
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Da KiNg Of PwNaGe
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IP: 3D9A 2AA6
Voted For: J-Will
Jwill killed this shit easy...thechosenone came wayyy to played and simplistic I thought...nothing witty or very creative....a very bland and played out verse...like all the e-thug lines and self glorification Jwill came much more consistent I thought...harder punches and more originality.... Vote=Jwill both of you please peep and drop an honest vote http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=153472 |
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IP: 1E2A 16F7
iight man good looking out ....................
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 6099 9647
Voted For: J-Will
breakdown j will flow-9/10 punches-8/10 rhymes-10/10 structure-10/10 total-37/40(good shyt) thechosenone flow-5/10 punches-3/10 rhymes-6/10 structure-5/10 total-19/40 this was a one sided battle j will took dis battle good shyt tho to both and no hate or d/r good shyt vote/j will |
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