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Monolo 0 0%
Desert Eagle 5 100.00%
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Old 10-23-04, 09:37 PM   #1
Young Drama
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Desert Eagle vs Monolo

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Old 10-23-04, 09:38 PM   #2
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Desert Eagle has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-23-04 09:38 PM.
 
Old 10-23-04, 09:39 PM   #3
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Monolo has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-23-04 09:39 PM.
 
Old 10-23-04, 09:51 PM   #4
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This nigga must not no im sicker than the average
I'll Cuttino slice his as like I was playin for da Magic
Kid Claim's he 17 but on AIM he 15 and goin up
dude loves cum and if he taste pussy he throwin up
Say's he do sickest from NY but i think he need a more pratice
peep his verse after i drop and see if he can match this
Say's his interest is spittin out weak niggas
but he coulnt pick a bitch up even if she was migdet
I rhyme fast or slow, humble or even noble
the only time he squeeze trigas is usin his Boost Mobile*


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Old 10-23-04, 09:53 PM   #5
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i'm hip-hop you're jus retro
im spittin petro
im a soldier from the get-go
when the tech-blow
ur skin will be changin color like a gecko
from the neck-yo
when i flex-yo
slow drink the prego
when red flows
& heads blow
ma set flows
wet ur ass up
but u know that i stay seco
now let's go!
oh no!
you cannot stop me
im ready 2 rock B
5 niggas come
5 niggas drop
5 triggas pop- B
Monolo doesn't giv a fuck bout who's up in this spot -G
so do ya job b4 i pop ya top like chops on block so lock ya locks
before sum-1 calls the cops
cuz u dropped like 2PAC on the block
this flow u cannot top!
but dont cry, jus get urself a tissue
but make sure 2 write on the paper, shit i jus missed u.
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Old 10-23-04, 09:55 PM   #6
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i kilt it...props though, good luck nigga.........
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Old 10-23-04, 10:06 PM   #7
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uppin dis shit yall c'mon can we get some votes on dis shit
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Old 10-23-04, 10:34 PM   #8
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Voted For: Desert Eagle

Lmao...Desert took this...both verses could have been better, but they both flowed well, had decent punches, and I was feelin the wordplay in both verses. However, Desert Eagle takes this...better punches and wordplay...this was pretty close yall...
 
Old 10-23-04, 11:23 PM   #9
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cant vote!! not enough posts but good battle here! jokes, onesided battle
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Old 10-24-04, 01:35 AM   #10
K.ontroverz.Y
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Voted For: Desert Eagle

aiight you took this easily

Monolo wat the fuck was that...that looked like a line in a whole verse hahahaha ROFL

dessert eagle ur shit was decent..ur punches was aiight..ur flow was dope...ur structure ok...personals..nice....

overall dope verse desser...and monolo never rap again
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Old 10-24-04, 02:45 AM   #11
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Voted For: Desert Eagle

aiight check it Desert Eagle got my vote
Explanation:
better flow came harder he had a better structure come on now what kind of structure you have Monolo?? weak nigga
Desert had personals and it was like Monolo was just rappin about any nigga didnt make it clear enuff it was wack for real
but Desert Eagle got my vote cuzz he came harder and better

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Old 10-24-04, 02:56 AM   #12
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hahhaa that was the wackest verse i have herd in mah life....seriously
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Old 10-24-04, 03:45 PM   #13
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Voted For: Desert Eagle

monolo you gotta be kidding me lololololol that was the wackest shit i ever heard
you flow was retarted, your style was gay, vocab was i don't even no what to call it.

eagle it was very nice i was like nearly every part. i think you could work on the mults
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Old 10-24-04, 08:32 PM   #14
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Fuck All Ya'll Bitches...................nuff Said
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Old 10-25-04, 01:43 AM   #15
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Voted For: Desert Eagle

Aiight, wassnt the best battle.. You both need to elevate.. Desert eagle, I see you got potential as long as you keep writing trying to elevate.. You showed signs of some decent punches, but you really gotta work on your wording and maybe try adding in some wittier punchlines. Read some dope vet battles and keep at it.

Monolo... Well, I really dont know what to say.. That was not any good.. How can you expect to win battles when one of your whole lines only said "Oh No".. Please elevate A LOT before you battle again.

Vote- Desert Eagle
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