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Mistake
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Mistake its just one of those things you have to break down and take eighteen with a pregnant girlfriend...what a stupid mistake it began..our senior year in highschool, breaking all the rules we thought we loved each other, didn't realize we were fools hiding in my bedroom, petrified of dad, trying not to be heard then it happend, a condom break, we pretended it never occured at first we just laughed it off... but little did we realize a few weeks later..."honey, i'm pregnant" became a big surprise now with responsibility in my life, no where close to prepared i told my family and faced the consequences trying not to be scared eight months later, he came, at first site the emotions were love at that point in my life, everything changed...push came to shove although i was excepted into every university, i now had a baby and this brought me to my measly college degree, major in carpentry time spent with my friends was hard, as i held back my tears hearing about what i missed, the parties, the games, the beers but, its just one of those things you have to break down and take nineteen now, but with a child next to me...my beloved mistake Last edited by Red Bull : 10-06-04 at 12:00 AM. Reason: Spelling Errors |
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nice poem it wasnt the best but it was real good...
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10-02-04, 11:49 AM | #3 | |||||||
bingo!
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nice job im really liken this poem keep writing..werd
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10-03-04, 09:40 AM | #4 | |||||||
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10-03-04, 09:26 PM | #5 | |||||||
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up.............
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10-05-04, 11:43 PM | #6 | |||||||
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up.............drop some feedback
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10-06-04, 04:49 PM | #7 | |||||
<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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good poem,,,your vocab was great,,so was the message in this,,,nice job..keep em comin...1
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10-06-04, 07:20 PM | #8 | |||||||
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^ word, thanks for the feed...up
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10-09-04, 10:50 AM | #9 | |||||||
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