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Old 01-20-05, 08:36 PM   #1
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Just a freestyle I made one day at school

Ayo...

I practically see more legs, on plate with 3 chickens
Start to fuck with me, and you'll teeth will be missing
I come up, and you might say Skriptz is a damn grouch
Move bitch and, lay down like a fat man on a black couch
You can't touch this nigga, cause my flow is so complex
Don't bother to come haters, cause after that it comes plex
I'm like the color blue mayn, cause you know I’m royal
Put your cheeks near the lava, so I can make the boil
I stay with 2 cheeks, but they have no damn feel or firm
Practically get hoes like two fags, with a handle on a low turn

Look kids, don't act tough around me, just because I'm black
Throw your punches up in the air, and get them slapped by Shaq
I’ll chew off the hater’s list, so I ruff ryde like Jadakiss
Everyone be coming up to me and saying, “How we get rich?”
I practically stay on the streets, you hobos stay in boxes
Putting Reebok’s on your feet, so you’ll know how to rock it
I stay true to myself, to my family, and always to the game
People playing on the streets or spray painting their name

I’m not the one to be hating, because of course, I’m just being me
People on VH1 be saying, that the all-time hater is that nigga Ice T
Your crib be having more spots, than Dalmatians and polka dots
Bet you tried to handcuff your girl, came home to broke locks
I aint the type of nigga to be brag about the size of my dick
I’d rather brag about something else like the size of my chips
You can’t beat me you fags, so go ahead and cry & whine
I spit fire every time so you can, hit stop and press rewind


nuttin much though...was bored during History Class


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Old 01-20-05, 09:24 PM   #2
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shit was straight, flowed perfectly together, nice structure, great topic. thanx for the feed man just hittin you back...
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Old 01-21-05, 02:03 PM   #3
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no problem....
uppin this..i guess
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Old 01-21-05, 02:09 PM   #4
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yea I agree it flowed pretty good had some good rhyminh and vocab was good also keep it up.

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Old 01-21-05, 05:21 PM   #5
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i liked this alot...good free good vocabulary and it was good creativty with sinilies and metaphores very good liked this alot it was like hmm hmm some lines but most of them were there i liked alot of the shit you had there my fav lines are prob...

I'm like the color blue mayn, cause you know I’m royal
Put your cheeks near the lava, so I can make the boil
You can’t beat me you fags, so go ahead and cry & whine
I spit fire every time so you can, hit stop and press rewind
^^there alright....but for a free this was good...keep up homie...

check my new OM...Until The End...links in the sig...
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Old 01-24-05, 03:02 PM   #6
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heh thanks...

up this shit then
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Old 01-29-05, 02:30 PM   #7
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get to uppin now...
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