No fuckin rules

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Killuminatic has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-24-04 10:38 PM.

U cant stand so goin toe to toe is perplexin to me
Cant stand for ovations so u stay on the edge of ya seat
Cant stand to lose, but I guess the name stands for somethin
Ghetto? Well thats a lie, and cripple? Cant stand for nothin
Bein ghetto man, callin me out, must be hard
But u wouldnt know a bitch slap, if u cuffed Dee Barnes
And I know its your hand got u nuttin all over the bed
Bein knee high man, dont play like pussy's not over ya head

ghetto cripple has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-25-04 12:38 PM.

Im back......
lets start the rematch.....




this kid will need alot more than an oxygen mask by the time im through/
I'll have him on his deathbed with life support, eatin' through feedin' tubes/

he wantin' to battle a cripple thinkin' im defenseless/
i have C.S.I. find you stabbed to death with bleach filled syringes/

the only way this cat could rap circles around me is if i hung him from a ceilin' fan/
glue his dick to his asshole and watch him piss an shit his pants/

oh, he's a ruff playa cummin' with raw beef/
masturbatin' to the screen so often his dick is raw meat/

i aint even have to hit this kid, he's breakin' his own ribs/
chokin' on a cathader cause he's suckin' his own dick/

killum under estimates this cripple and my diss-ability/
swap the chair for a tank, and leave you with a disability/

this cat K.O.'d me with our last meet, but this time its gonna change/
take him out at the knee's then cut off blood flow to the brain/

this fools always comin' at me with stupid shit like, im'a deflate ya tires/
bitch all im'a say is..................................try it/

it was a K.O. last time, but there aint gonna be a K.O. again/
cause how can I K.O. you when i've commited an unforgivable sin/


explanations:
C.S.I.=crime scene investigaters

lets get these votes started hit it up like the election motha fucka.
vote or die!

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Voted For: ghetto cripple

ok pretty average battle

G.C.

your sounded like a real battle
not text,but Like an outside battle
this was probably the best ALL THREATS
verse I seen on RV so far lol
good flow and ok wordplay
only thing to fix is the structure

Kill

yourrhyme scheme was very basic
the words you ended with should
only be used as fillers
structure was ok

the best thing to do is write a
whol;e bunch of punhlines and pick only the best
that wy your vese will be hott

peace

G.C.=winner

return the favor

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=156999

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hit this like the election ya'll, get em' votes poppin', vote or die, you know.

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Voted For: ghetto cripple

the beginning of the flow was killer, but then you faded off near the end, and i think thats when killumatic started to pick up his flow, but it was too late.
i think cripple got you with harder punches, and more personals. his structure wasnt all that. and it sounded like he had too many strectched lines, but i think he ran away with my vote
killumantic had a nice flow, but he based his flow on one thing ,and it wasnt quite sticking to me. his structure was koo. he won in that category, but he lost everything else. work on yo rhyming then go for a round three, i think you might get him if he come like he did again.
overall...cripple took this one like i said with harder punches, and more creativitie.

return HONEST votes on one of my battles

damn how am i gonan ko him the first time and be losin the second? guess i underestimated him.

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Real shit. I aint gonna lie. This cripple cat murdered me on this shit. All i can say is.............Damn

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Voted For: ghetto cripple

Cripple:
Explanation:
flow was better came pretty good this was a off side battle Cripple had some good shit Kiluminatic basic rhymes dawg

Cripple:
Flow-6/7
Meta's-0
Punches-HMM??

Killuminatic:
Flow-5 maybe a 6
Meta's-Hmm??
Punches-not really there

Cripple got my vote due to came harder better flow good structure kids cool

no hate

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