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Old 10-23-04, 05:29 PM   #1
Stryk-9
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Mad SkIllZ I want some one wit skills to test it!!!

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I form like sworms of Hornets,
to leave you lyricaly dorment,
I torment cats who bore-me,
In my path i leave a bloodbath like stormin the beach of Normandy,
My wrath left my folk's mourning-me,
So try forcen me back, or pushin my course off track,
Cause i show no remorse to the fact that some cats cant rap,
I spit text, High on Coke and X,
My flows connect like dots, to infect your thoughts,
Set to leave you lost in Kaos,
So just take this as a lesson taught,
Thats been brought to you live and direct........
It's frightining, like being left to my own device's,
Or my mind left to it's own advise,
My arrivals more feared then the ghost of Christ,
My flow is ice- And I'm intellegent,
So the way that i act is irrelevent,
Yo! I speak fast when i talk,
Sometime's wit irrational thoughts of nonsense,
Takin out of context, and spit rhymes that are ill-log-ical,
My cause is not propable,
A flaw is not possible,
And my flow is unstoppable,
See, Wit God as my witness,
I'm a mirrored Image of a misfit,
That's alway's spitten on some sickshit,
It's like i was fixed wit sick mixture's,
Like I was equipt to spit scripture's,
Addicted to chicks and mixed liqour's,
So now my ideas get unstiched just a bit quicker........
Wit word's I create a topic, That's catastrophic,
I'm sicker then a priest coming out the closet,
My sick thought's are constant,
But when put into word's, my flow will leave you frost-bit,
Look, I think I'm morally corrupted,
I'm horribly mis-trusted,
It's like the core of me's erupted, wit an attitude of fuck it,
Composed of lying and cussin,
And I hang wit hoe's who are always try'n to be F#*kin

HIP-HOP Stay True

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Old 10-23-04, 05:35 PM   #2
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Someone Holla at your boy wit some feedback peace.....
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Old 10-23-04, 09:58 PM   #3
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Shit was alright, nothin really stood out. Only problem i had was it was too abstract. Theres already too much shit thats just rhymin and no point. Skills though, real shit.
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Old 10-23-04, 10:12 PM   #4
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Aii This How I c It

Like my Man Said Nuttin Stood Out But Ya Flow Was terrific
U Didnt have A REal Target You Were Jus Goin From One thing to Another But The put Together of Yo Structure was nice as Heaven
Id Give you a 8/10

Hey I C Your New do U Want your first Battle Mayne Hit Me Bac Up ASAP Jus tell Me if u want Is Topical / Text Holla

U Can Email Id get it faster DaydrenDipset@wmconnect.com
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