I'm ghetto as hell
but beautiful as well
it's easy to tell, that i'm Heavenly
Wether im dressed down in boots
or in a cute pink suit
im still real, im still me
which is Heavenly
I work, I go to school
just a tiny bit rude
and im sweet, very nice
have a good adittude
I'm not into all the drama
always keepin my cool

And by now i know you are feelin me
cause its quite clear and obvious
that im oh so Heavenly

Good flow. Too short, though. You contradicted yourself when you said you were rude, then on the next line that you were sweet and very nice. Not too deep. Self glorification is not really my thing. Two lines brock off from the length of the other lines. Decent. Keep writing and elevating.

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i read this because my actually name is Heavenly...

but to respond to this, it was kinda short, well very short u stated a couple of things that were contradicting, but keep doin' what u do and keep elevatin' ya work, ma, stay up and peep my open mic in my sig, aight pz.. *get quality and quantity workin' together..*

~uno~

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I agree with Fiya

it was real short..no real emotion

Lady Fiya=sexy

peace

B.L.A.!

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^ha ha y'all peep my open mic- and i'm from chi-town too, southside near stony island hit up my open mic in my sig..

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