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Old 10-30-04, 11:19 AM   #1
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hell's unfoldin' for my foes.
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i don' need assistance "b", i rank high in selfsufficiency
climb in dis game sadistic'lly,slueth ya trickery
leave emcees mythic'lly,mysteries
lookin' to other rappers for indemnity
i expose their infinite,infamy;infamous,inequity
they're indentations on my belt,facin defeat inevitably
constant intrusive,incursions excessively,excrably
my euphonious flow,edentates egotists
leave em feeble n flacid leakin'deoxyribonucleic acid
to dese fake ass rappers im disastrous
no need to spit da verse when i can kill wit da ad-libs
leave em' in desolate dankness,shackled from da wrist to the ankletts.
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ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me
N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there)
EVIL............backwards =............LIVE
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Old 10-30-04, 12:04 PM   #2
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uppn for feeds............
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I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY,
ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me
N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there)
EVIL............backwards =............LIVE
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Old 10-30-04, 01:13 PM   #3
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Taht was aiight man!! Keep em coming & keep shit simple so everyone can understand it mainly you. You don't have nobody to impress just keep that in mind. If you sounds good to you release it, Everybody likes originality so keep it real. Overall that was a nice drop!! 8/10 You can do better than that bro keep practicing!!!!
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Old 10-30-04, 01:28 PM   #4
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i understand it well.if i didn't then i wouldn't drop or wrote it.when i kept it simple it was a problem.so i stepped my game up a little sumn.don' care to impress a soul just elevating.thanx for da feed tho' Chew.stay up.chk my other joint too.uppn this shit......
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I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY,
ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me
N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there)
EVIL............backwards =............LIVE
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Old 10-31-04, 09:34 AM   #5
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uppn for feeds...................
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I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY,
ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me
N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there)
EVIL............backwards =............LIVE
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Old 11-01-04, 09:02 AM   #6
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good shit overall....ive seen better from u Love damn wats up? lol but yea 9/10.....come on boi i know u can do better than dat
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Old 11-01-04, 09:03 AM   #7
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feedbak pleez...
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I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY,
ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me
N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there)
EVIL............backwards =............LIVE
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Old 11-01-04, 05:13 PM   #8
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it was good...might wanna use some smaller words for some poeple , 8/10
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Old 11-01-04, 05:18 PM   #9
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thx for da feedbak.appreciate it.
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I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY,
ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me
N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there)
EVIL............backwards =............LIVE
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Old 11-02-04, 01:58 PM   #10
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uppn for feeds..........
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I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY,
ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me
N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there)
EVIL............backwards =............LIVE
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