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10-17-04, 10:31 PM
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«αи αятιѕт σf ωσя∂ѕ»
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NEW!!! SPuL Shit, nigkas!!!
IP: 7AAA 22C5
i commented on R-Rated and Senserrr mu fuckas!! and Di's tracks.
 Yea, it's called "My Story" yea, calam I kno you said redo it, but I ain't got time. so blah. real shit too. tru. *_*
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10-18-04, 03:26 PM
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«αи αятιѕт σf ωσя∂ѕ»
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IP: CA7A 946F
upppppppppp.....................
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10-18-04, 03:32 PM
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Im Short.Ur Fat.He's Gay.
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IP: A9D7 FA65
Theres no link dude.
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10-18-04, 03:43 PM
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«αи αятιѕт σf ωσя∂ѕ»
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IP: CA7A 946F
LOL!!! damn, thanks for tellin' me that. lmfao
wow... lol www.soundclick.com/spulakareckless ^if you got hate, please don't jus say it sucks, tell me how I can improve. weerd. pc
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10-18-04, 04:37 PM
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The Light
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IP: C5D3 9246
i never said redo it nugguh
 .. i just said,. if you wanted to, you could -_-
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Mixtape Pushed Back to mid september.. Holla at me for a copy still I'm felt cause im real. Can you say the same ? Prolly not.
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10-18-04, 06:15 PM
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Ya mom massages my nuts
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IP: 36C3 7C54
yeah this was def. better quality...flow was fair...chorus I wasn't feeling just wasn't as emotional as it shoulda been an the way you delivered it was weak but definitely a vast improvement
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10-18-04, 09:03 PM
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«αи αятιѕт σf ωσя∂ѕ»
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IP: CA7A 946F
weerd, thx for feed. I'll improve on that shit.
upp.....
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10-21-04, 04:01 PM
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You Love My Style.
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IP: 5572 2B68
Emotions could be betta man, this was good quality betta than mine..lol flow was aight
u could have done betta chorus but u improved i c...............props fam.............
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10-21-04, 10:09 PM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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IP: 2E7E 4D00
.::This Was A Nice Track..The Quality Is Better Than Half The Peeps On Dis Board and Your Lyrics Were Nice. Flow Was Aight but The Chorus Needs Work. Nice Overall Drop Here Man. Keep Doing Ya Thang::. ~R~ |
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10-22-04, 02:27 AM
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New Jack
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IP: 31A2 BA7E
Lmao, I Thought It Wasd The Beat Then I Go To Make Feedback N They All Talkin Bout Chorus...???...wtf...
. Ill Go Listen To The Right 1 Now...lmao,..... . AIGHT MAN I THOUGHT this was nice, good job...stay up..!  Last edited by .:Jack Rackam:. : 10-22-04 at 02:36 AM. |
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10-29-04, 09:49 PM
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Im Short.Ur Fat.He's Gay.
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IP: B274 5338
1. Kill the yo yo shit an check it.
2. Turn your vocal's up. 3. Good Flow. on a Blah very generic beat. 4. Try not to make ur hook sound like ur verse's. sing a lil. It wasn't bad, All I can say is it does get a lil annoyin the way u Flow. The in an out stuff.....its jus a lil....a tad....annoyin. I'd like to see you stay "in" all the time. Nice. -1 |
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10-30-04, 04:18 PM
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«αи αятιѕт σf ωσя∂ѕ»
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IP: F8D4 A856
aiight, thanks, man. I'll work on that. Gotta redo this later. word. I'ma check that "Searchin" song right now. weerd pc
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10-31-04, 12:10 PM
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New to RV
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IP: CEC2 D817
Yea..
All the yo and uh shit is done with.. Your hook is aight... Your presence is aight, ya flow is annoying to me for some reason.. but that's just me, you know.. This beat, defintely ain't feeling it... And ya emotion is aight.. Lyrics is straight, quality good... I say work on ya flow and emotion.. And ya voice also... that "aaa" "flaaa" "gaaa" shit needs to get lost.. Do you though, keep working at it. |
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10-31-04, 12:13 PM
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Bonecrushing Nigga
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IP: 98C0 39B0
LOL>.SPuL... that was shit compared to your other ones...
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11-01-04, 03:46 AM
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Vendetta the K.O. King
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IP: 78D8 9CA9
"Ya I got a big house, and lotta money - which is great/
but don't be runnin your mouth - cause my life ain't a piece of cake/" ^^OMG worst line I ever heard in my life. hahaha. ANYways... I thought you spent like a couple hundred on quality? It ain't as good as it should if you bought a good mic. Flow is better than last i heard of you. Not hot, but better than your last. I never knew you had a lisp... Not bad, just kinda slur words like you got fake teeth or something. ANyways, expected more from your "new quality". And you scraped a guy for a girl named Emily? Best line: Cause everywhere you go, it depends on your race/ cause no matter how much you know, you'll always be judged on your face/ ^^^ true 1
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