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11-06-04, 02:02 AM
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I have a lot to learn...
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Fly - OMB's first serious open mic... peep it
IP: 48EA 7C3F
-Fly- Trying my best, but my dodging was slow and my hitting was hurried only 2nd round, already had blood at the nose and my vision was blurry Took a few in the ribs n' the tummy.... then the end of round siren went ding Tired as shit, coach was yappin, but I was sittin here at the side of the ring tryin to think............ completely ignoring my coach talking next to me Ive decided I cant beat him physically, so Ill have to beat him mentally Planned it out, and then the round started, I immediately moved back a bit crossed my arms and leaned on the ropes.......... carrying out my strategy He threw heavy hooks n' jabs at me, my face, chest, and abs were sore unbearable pain, as he bashed my dome my head was whippin back n' forth 7 more rounds this happened for, at least, finally, he was getting tired carried on my plan and stood upright, my torso was stone, my legs were iron This was it, my chance to fight back.. With force I drew back my fist rage from all the oppression, racism and discrimination, I threw with that hit It blew him to bits, he stumbled back and fell, later he was taken to hospital It was only because of my determination I managed to do the impossible Later on, in interviews with the press, a lot of questions were asked "how did you do it?" .."I told you I would beat him before and you laughed.. I beat george foreman because I knew I could.. theres no more to tell its simple.. the only limitations you have are the ones you set on yourself"  ...word
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11-06-04, 02:11 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: CDAA 2D0A
hahahah rofl lmao omg omg good one omb you rele got me lmao rofl hahaha.....
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11-06-04, 02:19 AM
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I have a lot to learn...
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IP: 48EA 7C3F
It was a real one dumbass!!! instead of being about bruce lee, or food.
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11-06-04, 02:21 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: CDAA 2D0A
OMB...i know YOU dumbass thats why i was like all laughen jeesh hoes an tricks omb all tha same...
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11-06-04, 02:22 AM
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I have a lot to learn...
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IP: 48EA 7C3F
A small child>...Magnificent...
na'mean? stop freeposting in my open mic -_-
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11-06-04, 02:24 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: CDAA 2D0A
omb...
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11-06-04, 02:52 AM
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Nicely done
IP: 529B 2A24
Nicely done. I like stories written into ryhme form. I can not relate to this but it is nicely written. A bit of confusion but that can be fixed by splitting some of the verses up.....Nice piece tho
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11-06-04, 04:43 AM
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Addicted
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IP: 4ED6 D0C7
nice wordplay it was a good piece...title misleading though lol but overall nice open mic .....gud vocab and nice flow stay up
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11-06-04, 07:49 AM
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Back In Business
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IP: 9227 0965
damn it...lol... i thought you were talking about yaself until i got to the end...lmao...
i liked this shyt... Muhammad Ali is THE GREATEST!!!... my idol, so i definitely enjoyed the ending.... werd! |
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11-06-04, 10:27 AM
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***cITYSLICka***
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IP: E31B AA42
definately a hot drop.10/10.
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  I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY, ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there) EVIL............backwards =............LIVE |
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11-06-04, 05:40 PM
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I have a lot to learn...
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IP: 48EA 7C3F
word thanks for the feedback.
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11-06-04, 05:49 PM
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Back....
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IP: A987 DCD9
nice shit man real good verse. lol return da favor in one of my battles and my open mic.
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11-07-04, 07:41 AM
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I have a lot to learn...
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IP: 48EA 7C3F
uppin............
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11-07-04, 08:13 PM
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IP: 3AE8 B82C
yo dat shit was pretty tight man
i gotta go wit "loveliss" u got 10/10 on dat one.return da fav.on my verse called "these is my feelins" and ill return da fav bac
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11-09-04, 03:08 AM
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leave you rest'n pz's
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IP: C837 AA17
lol...unexpected omb....it was koo though...
why the hell you change your name to razzle dazzle...? man you pick weird names...lmao....good drop though...
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts what the fuck, was you high..? did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...! . . fake fucks..move on...! |
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