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| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
11-07-04, 06:47 PM
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..::shut the fuck up::..
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new song (HEAD RUSH)
IP: 07E0 A9F2
Check my lastest song out in my sig you might like this one cause im improving all the time but please try and be positive on this shit.
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11-07-04, 06:50 PM
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Bow Chicka Bow Wow
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IP: FEFC E273
you eleavtin but your quality still isnt that great.........flow needs some work just ride the beat dont force ya words it kinda sounds like ya reading.....get confident and jsut bust out with some good delivery .....and work on mic presence
hit me up as i ahve replied to 2 of your tracks.......you can find me my therad |
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11-08-04, 03:35 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: 529B 2A24
The quality is poor.
The lyrics are decent. The flow was way off(But can work on that) Like said above sounds like your reading it which makes you studder your rhymes. Just work on connecting the sentences better..... Good jOb |
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11-11-04, 12:33 PM
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FiVe SoUrCe CeO
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IP: 3240 794D
Good job?
LMAO...on what?...making me laugh YES...EXCELLENT SInner...ur return diss (not like it's necessary) is coming...it's guaranteed RV classic...u will die in 1 day BIOTCH |
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