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True Freestyle, need Critique
IP: 3BBD AB83
Im spittin 16 in 1.
I spit, to make the mic like a flammable torch "It's understandable" my mind is a mechanical force And I'm a cannibal my mandible is chewin' ya corpse "I'm tyrannical, a vandle of intangible sorts Not a mineral a mammal or an animal, I'm. Metaphysical, the syllables in critical rhymes Flows blowin' off ya limbs like invisible mines Been invincible with rhymes since the biblical times A warlord with a sword from the Mongul Horde Speak the tongue of the lord, to bless my vocal chords They tried to resurrect hip-hop, but faith is gone So I'll take it over by force like Ghengis Khan If you say it ain't raw, you better pray to Allah Cuz I got an arrow that'll travel straight thru the jaw Got breath control, flow like a ship with a sail Divine when I spit, like if I sipped from the grail Cuz I'm immortal |
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IP: 7B67 4572
If this is genuinely off the top of ya head then this is nice, nice vocab nice flow sorta reminded me of kool keith. check mine returning to my home. aight cuz 1
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IP: 4427 437B
Fo sho thanks dawg. I twas spittin and my dawg Kaffiya typed it as a freestyle herre.
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IP: 976E 087B
I Like When Cats Bite Whole Verses..
Makes My Job All That More Easier.. I Admit It A Dope As Fucc Verse, But It Sounds Much Doper Coming Out Of Tha Mouth Of Apathy.. HA.. |
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Re: True Freestyle, need Critique
IP: 4577 CD9A
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your a dirt bag biting whole verses nice job biting apathy dowg |
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