aight this is my first attempt ever at audio... its a minute and a half long and its a lil choppy but im just starting with audio... dont hate because this is my first one ever so give me some feedback.... this one is a diss on philosipher who keeps runnin his mouth.... enjoy

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/wickedclownmusic.htm

Hey man...haha were proud having you in Da Rip...this is dope!...just put a little more emotion and its gonna be perfect,,,your flow is cool too...anyway if you wanna collab holla at me

didnt like it too much...sounded like u were mumbling throughout the whole thing...i had to turn my volume all the way up to here you...beat was decent...jus try working on ur quality

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you need to work on flow and EMOTION turn your vocals up..........and work on delivery

uppin this... yeah i know it was poor quality.... keep in mind this is my first attempt

yea u can terll its ur first attmept... sounds like ur readin this straight off the paper.. try and say ur verse alotta times over outloud so that u have it memorized.... that way u dont have to worry about the words and u can start to put in emotion.... yea and turn ur vocals UP..... I CANT HERE U..... and u kinda mumbled and whispered it. were u embarassed of wat u were sayin or was it really late???? u sounded ok but u needa def work on ur quality

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...The real Renegade before Hova...

fuck tryna say this is ya first attempt....u shoulda still wanted to work on ya shit so peeps would listen to ya first attempt and be like damn...dont make excuses..u mumbled ya verse...like u aint want ya mother to come in a hear u record then beat ya ass or somethin...put some type of emotion into it man...wassup wit u keep hittin the mic too...the only time u had emotion was when u said..."yea" and dat wasdnt even in the verse....man work on ya shit alot kid...

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[.Diabolic:.]

beat is good but ya delivery is bad it sounds like your talking and knocking your mic around lol just elevate your flow and emotion maybe your mic presense to -peace-

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I.nfamouz L.yrikal L.egendz

First attempt huh.....lol.

Anyway, why are you whispering? No emotion at all. Anyway, you need a little help with the cool edit tutorials....go check out audio assistance

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