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Old 07-10-02, 01:30 AM   #1
JOeY TeRRIFYING
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for all these kids in the rb. pep and learn sumptin

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embrace unity


this peice is deicated to dime, varentao, monkey poet, psycko22, synickle, da gyrl remarqabl, and last not but defintly not least the non active Baby Gurl68.
and 2 anyone else that doesnt come to the site just to start shit, peace.

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Old 07-11-02, 11:40 AM   #2
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Good dedication babyboi,
glad to see u still on RB
Miss u ...

keep doin ur thang ...

pz xXx DiMe
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Old 07-11-02, 11:45 AM   #3
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so powerful for such a short piece got ur point across well stay livin
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Old 07-11-02, 01:25 PM   #4
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thanx ya 2 and danja yeah im gonn keep living. cause what are my other choices death. and thanx dime for the support. peace out.

joey
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Old 07-11-02, 02:45 PM   #5
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hmmm....liked it Joey...could feel ya emotions....speaking a good few truths there for sure....

....got no time for hating....keeping my stance on the basics of life - its all good (well to a certain extent)....

....respect...
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Old 07-12-02, 01:24 AM   #6
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rite on varentao appreciatte taking time out of yo day to peep my stuff. and yeah in a way this had emotion, but only because theres a plain site message to it. stay up. peace.

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Old 07-12-02, 09:58 AM   #7
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WUT ABOUT ME....?? LOL LOL LMAO LOL LOL
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Old 07-12-02, 10:30 AM   #8
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*feels special... she was dedicated to....* awesome peice you have here... even though it was short, it held as much message and emotion as if it were a regular sized poem... and the message is a strong one that people should learn... i cant pick ne fave lines cuz they are all meaningful...thanks again for teh dedication... keep it flowin
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Old 07-12-02, 12:56 PM   #9
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short but deep...im feelin wutcha sayin. keep 'em comin
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Old 07-13-02, 12:46 AM   #10
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also dedicated to sin. yeah rite. lol. but thanx monkey poet nice 2 see a visting my stuff again. and papeswifey thanx for peepin my stuff. stay up.

joey

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Old 07-13-02, 04:29 PM   #11
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IS it because im so wack that im not deddicated to this MASTERPIECE.....LOL




nice piece, well structured, vocab a lil scratchy, simple but got the point across GOOD JOB ,

pz , respect
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Old 07-14-02, 12:37 AM   #12
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thanx foe peepin my stuff blias, sorry that i didnt post your name, but i didnt want to have the dedication list bigger then the actual poem.

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Old 07-15-02, 12:09 AM   #13
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uppin
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Old 07-15-02, 12:36 AM   #14
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What about me? What about me?

Actually, forget about me. And about Raven. I'm pretty sure this was the first peice of yours I read. Judging by the title "pep and learn sumptin" I figured you were gonna right something to start shit about how be better and crap. How suprised I am to see that's the complete opposite you wrote.

Cool.

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Old 07-15-02, 07:40 PM   #15
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thanx Necro for the reply. and yeah his peice is intended to teach people that i could braw with ya all, but i'd rather use my skill to build, and i think alot of other kids in this site should look into these same ideas. peace out.
joey

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