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Old 11-25-04, 12:03 AM   #1
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Expression Freestyle

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THIS AN FREESTYLE OF EXPRESSING OF MY FEELINGS

SHIT DONT MAKE SENSE- CAUSE ITS AN FREESTYLE





Is this heaven in the presence
Is it true what people are speakin
Where your soul be locked in a paradise
Do god call u up from above to close ur eyes
Dying of old age is like an death penalty
Like sleep u wouldn’t know if ya heart was beating
U can have an heart attack from the touch of devil’s hand
Holding your chest , asking for breath its like losing grip from gods hands
Then u slip away yo brain goes dead then yo eyes goes fade to black
Ya heart stops bumping thumping u had one life , one oxygen that was ya last
I can’t help it seeing a dead person in an coffin the most hurt thing is that they can’t say good bye
Its hurting me inside writing this is making me go flash-back when I lost my girl in an drive by
Her hair was tan-sun-shine color then 5 seconds later it turned to devils red blood
I dropped to my kness. why I didn’t took that 9 to 5 shots into my hoood
Seeing one of yo people u loved decease who’z fault? Was it god or the devils
Now iam going to sit in my black corner and watch the world around me crumple





















I dropped to my kness. why I didn’t took that 9 to 5 shots into my hoood - MEANING WHY I DIDNT TOOK THEM BULLETS IN MY SKULL~!
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Very fucking Nice man, deep shyt, Ima nominate ya for Best poet.

Uppin this for drastic....10/10.....NICE SHYT MAN keep it up.


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Old 11-25-04, 01:02 AM   #2
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GJ dawg..

drew up some ?'s and was very personal I can tell..

structure and font had me squinting but still iight


good flow too


8/10 cuz of font
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Old 11-25-04, 01:38 AM   #3
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good shit drastic 8/20 we gotta collab soemtime me you and epic famop
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8/10 i meen hahaha
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Old 11-25-04, 02:22 PM   #5
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o aiiiiiiiiiiiiight i feel cha yo uppin for some more feedback..............
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Very fucking Nice man, deep shyt, Ima nominate ya for Best poet.

Uppin this for drastic....10/10.....NICE SHYT MAN keep it up.


SEE THAT EMPIRE WERD~!

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OUT NOW-THE SLEEP & THE DREAM
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