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11-18-04, 03:42 PM | #1 | |||||
GoD LiKe
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The Harvest of the weak
IP: 70A9 C9CB
Yo/I''ll plague you with my bubonic tonic
I'LL start to spit ebonic phonix that hits the streets like hydroponic chronic connect like electronic economics make ya shake from my sonic techtonics lyrically I''m johnny pneumonic and upon completion i began unleashing a venomous secretion on any rapper that wanted to start critiquing have your brain fluid leaking and your nervous system tweaking you begin weakening as soon as I grip the mic I spit so nice I''ll rip ya twice and still have time to strip your ice that''s why they call me SADISTIC firing Ballistics hot enough to light up the torch at the Olympics Armed with the pimpist linguistics and a style harder to read then heiroglyphics so get with this you continue to bring your hate I''ll decimate your unsafe fate make your ice liquidate and your brain sedate I predetate on any mc that spits whack verses got lyricall black hearses and overstaffed nurses I spit mad curses when I get pissed send fire from my fist like an Arsonist make your shit twist into contorted positions under any condition I beat my opposition into submission have weak rhymers drowning on there lyricall christening I begin chipping away at stone structures so tight you won''t find no punctures I function like a continuous conjunction readily firing with electromagnetic wiring got me spitting 16 bars without tiring no lyingyou try deciphering I''ll have your brain frying NO DOUBT-MY SKILL IS DEATH DEFYING
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11-18-04, 03:50 PM | #2 | |||||||
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IP: E31B AA42
Damn...................this Is The Absolute Most Incredible Drop I've Ever Seen.good Everything......
Vocab,structure,flow..........flawless.100/100
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I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY, ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there) EVIL............backwards =............LIVE |
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11-24-04, 10:25 AM | #3 | |||||
GoD LiKe
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IP: 947A 2011
Uppn-------------------
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11-24-04, 10:29 AM | #4 | ||||
Hates Fucking Idiots
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IP: 07E0 A9F2
It was aight vocab was good structure could be improved, flow was aight...i'd give it 7/10 keep em comin...oh yea rtf on my open mic
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11-27-04, 11:59 AM | #5 | ||||||
New to RV
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IP: 551D 769A
honestly this sucked. no structure, horribly played lines, dumb ass rhyme scheme you didn't say anything just a bunch of words strung together in some forum, besides the flow sucks. Get kids off your dick and they'll tell you the same.
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11-27-04, 12:11 PM | #6 | ||||||||
mess with me get cooked
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IP: E7D0 E62F
Its Aiiiiiiight Nuttin Special In My Eyes
Flow Is Kinda Chopped Up Vocab Needs A Liil Work Stretch Cha Lines A Lil Bit But Dont Ova Do It Mutli'z I Sense It But Either Than This Could've Been Betta Ice Pick 7/10 Drop An Honest Feedback In My Open Mic "diss To This Kid At Skool-smoke" I'll Preciate The Honest Feed This Could Improved
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