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D Fury 5 83.33%
Verbal Phenom 1 16.67%
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Old 11-13-04, 08:58 AM   #1
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D Fury vs Verbal Phenom

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Check in by: 11-13-04 at 09:28 AM

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Win by forfeit
 
Old 11-13-04, 09:01 AM   #2
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Verbal Phenom has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-13-04 09:01 AM.
 
Old 11-13-04, 09:07 AM   #3
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D Fury has ACCEPTED this battle on 11-13-04 09:07 AM.
 
Old 11-13-04, 09:43 AM   #4
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I spit verbs with haste to disburse your face...
This kid couldn't kick prolific shit if he had 66 more big words to say...
Your skillz are unproved,and undetermined as far as existence...
My lyrics are the truth,Im make you switch ya name to Science-Fiction...
Known to rip kids with a surgeons precision...
Sting you like a fluid thats acidic poured on an incision...
Fast like a cheetah, take ya loss, act intelligently...
Cause you aint able to handle an ace like a card dealer wit a felony...
Learn a lesson,cuz my wide-eyes can see that your fake...
Words push your wig back futher than Shynes sophmore release date...

Goodluck .......peace......
 
Old 11-13-04, 09:45 AM   #5
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weerrd. heres mine.

yer prewrites a bittin... so yer conect wit less then half a bite
any talent or style u hold deception, like clebarity look-a-likes
everyone looks upon u as low...the scum of a net emcee
coz ya title is bad, i wonder if u spit any wicked lines against me
honest to god this battle is fixed up...u aint even werth it
i'm sure my verse will be bought..but u'll be first to reserve it
ur dreams wont be fu-filled...so this battle is like a broken cup
to explained ya verses..like all ur gurls they need to be broken up
 
Old 11-15-04, 02:26 PM   #6
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Voted For: D Fury

Aiight Wicked One or D Fury or wateva got this one.

His wordplay was much better and the punches just hit harder.
Best line was
Fast like a cheetah, take ya loss, act intelligently...
Cause you aint able to handle an ace like a card dealer wit a felony...
Lol, that was dope.

Verbal, your verse was pretty good man, you had a couple nice punches in there, but spellin wasnt too great and thats pretty important, also the punches didnt hit as had as D's.

you know what i voted.
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Old 11-15-04, 02:28 PM   #7
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Yo Return the favour, links up in the sig.

Pc, dope battle
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Old 11-20-04, 12:45 AM   #8
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Voted For: Verbal Phenom

yer prewrites a bittin... so yer conect wit less then half a bite
any talent or style u hold deception, like clebarity look-a-likes
…5
everyone looks upon u as low...the scum of a net emcee
coz ya title is bad, i wonder if u spit any wicked lines against me
…4
honest to god this battle is fixed up...u aint even werth it
i'm sure my verse will be bought..but u'll be first to reserve it
…6
ur dreams wont be fu-filled...so this battle is like a broken cup
to explained ya verses..like all ur gurls they need to be broken up
…5

^Overall u had a decent verse…
work on your vocab. Kid…


I spit verbs with haste to disburse your face...
This kid couldn't kick prolific shit if he had 66 more big words to say...
…4
Your skillz are unproved,and undetermined as far as existence...
My lyrics are the truth,Im make you switch ya name to Science-Fiction...
…6
Known to rip kids with a surgeons precision...
Sting you like a fluid thats acidic poured on an incision...
…4
Fast like a cheetah, take ya loss, act intelligently...
Cause you aint able to handle an ace like a card dealer wit a felony...
…3
Learn a lesson,cuz my wide-eyes can see that your fake...
Words push your wig back futher than Shynes sophmore release date...
…4

^Overall u had a decent verse too…
punches were weak to both of you…
but Cosmos. Gets my vote for comin
less weak…
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Old 11-23-04, 10:48 PM   #9
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UUUpppppinnnnnn.....Leave La Link....Ill return favor wit honest vote ....peace....
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Old 11-29-04, 10:01 AM   #10
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Uppin........Cmon People.....Leave Link ill return honest vote then peace....
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Old 11-30-04, 02:13 PM   #11
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Uppppppppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn.................... ......
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Old 12-08-04, 03:12 PM   #12
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UUUUUUUppppppppinnnnnnnnnnnn...................... ....
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Old 12-08-04, 04:12 PM   #13
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Voted For: D Fury

ambient:
yer prewrites a bittin... so yer conect wit less then half a bite
any talent or style u hold deception, like clebarity look-a-likes
Weak opener, punch wasn't that hard
everyone looks upon u as low...the scum of a net emcee
coz ya title is bad, i wonder if u spit any wicked lines against me
Could've been worded better to make ther punch connect
honest to god this battle is fixed up...u aint even werth it
i'm sure my verse will be bought..but u'll be first to reserve it
Weak, on real punch here
ur dreams wont be fu-filled...so this battle is like a broken cup
to explained ya verses..like all ur gurls they need to be broken up
Bad closer also

Wicked One:
I spit verbs with haste to disburse your face...
This kid couldn't kick prolific shit if he had 66 more big words to say...
Stretched 2nd line, punch didn't really connect
Your skillz are unproved,and undetermined as far as existence...
My lyrics are the truth,Im make you switch ya name to Science-Fiction...
Punch wasn't hard at all here
Known to rip kids with a surgeons precision...
Sting you like a fluid thats acidic poured on an incision...
Ok punch...
Fast like a cheetah, take ya loss, act intelligently...
Cause you aint able to handle an ace like a card dealer wit a felony...
Ok punch again, verse is improving slightly...
Learn a lesson,cuz my wide-eyes can see that your fake...
Words push your wig back futher than Shynes sophmore release date
Decent closer, punch was aight

Winner: Wicked One, for harder punches. Although Wicked's structure was a little off, it wasn't that bad. Ambient, all you need is some elevation...

RTF at a link in my sig, honest explained votes only...
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