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12-04-04, 07:01 AM
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Re-Release, 'Demonic Lair'.
IP: 4036 4A1E
This Is a Short Key I Did A While Ago, Did'nt Get great Feed So I'm Bringing It Back Up, This Was Just Something I Key'd.. Trippin' On The Brink Of a Hellish Existence The Scorching Heat Proceeded With Agonising Persistence Scolding My train of Thought Grinding To a Halt Trapped, I was Imprisoned Amongst Lost Soul's Like a Bank Vault Figure's Below Me Trudging,Occasionally Glancing at Their Tormentor's Mindless Drone's Corrupted By Fiendish-Wrong Doing Dementor's Their Heart's Had been Torn From Their Possesion and Thrown Into a Furnace Stony Emotionless Feeling's Stained Their Expression's One man's face was Sterness He was In the Prime Of his Youth-What had He done To End Up here? Prolly a Young Thug-Jackin' Car's Thiefing Introducing Drug's and Beer The Main Priority was How Do I Evade This Twisted Nightmare? My Eye's Flashed it was just a Vision Of My Afterlife-But I'll Live My Life Knowing Ima End Up Eventually In the Demon's Lair.
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12-04-04, 08:40 AM
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IP: 8C24 2516
This was a very different drop, i liked the vocab.. also think your structure coulda used some work, but thats nothin big..
hit this up: http://community.rapverse.com/showt...ewpost&t=163796
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