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11-30-04, 08:52 AM
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...Poison Food For Thought...
IP: 01C3 560C
heres some bullshit with meaning for you all to peep. check it out.... Envision, being caught in a position, based on an unwise split-decision Its unfortunate how some cats were given… the wrong mission Hard headed… known for willingness be down for most everything Not guessing there’d been secrets management were concealing As though without feeling bystanders watch in fearful amazement Underground figureheads leering like demons in your basement They meet on the outskirts of town… grey smoke filtering night air Mob Heads gathered aware… large silhouettes…oil slicked hair Iris piercing darkness… watch ya back n beware around your enemies It could pop off… Its business here tho… we swapping cash for keys Some overseas imports altogether worth over 250 G’s… that’s blood money Hookers, profits from extortion… counting green ‘we’ll buy gunnery, Recruit kids for the streets they can run the drugs and cash the loot’ Means of ends meet… understand the overlord… recognise and salute Or end up body bagged in a car boot… that’s real mate use wise judgement Coz what you’re shown on TV its all propaganda issued by Government Worrying society with stories of murder, rape… hassling my conscience While unseen young boys sporting polished shoes… picture of confidence Mimicking pops stride… fed by daddy’s whores in pink panties Pocket the tips jar from dads bar run by pro cons and vigilantes Its so confusing how my loss is your gain… everywhere it’s all the same What to believe in? The Government sparks pain and kills in God’s name Steals my money… a Tax system funding weapons of mass destruction Parliament holds the hand of corruption… these cunts know nothing Fuck em Get high kid if that’s your style… shoot off guns if you so please Fuck whores but don’t catch the virus, stay fit eat healthy u wont catch disease.
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Spit it from the heart, spit a thousand darts, split ya head apart…
Emcees depart, like rubin carter my hurricane left u scarred… Like a spiked bat grammatical bar, like a wonderland drug… Tumble - ing like a flagon of rum and 2 blunts, like the funk baby… Last edited by Trauma : 12-05-04 at 01:17 AM. |
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11-30-04, 08:58 AM
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Hates Fucking Idiots
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IP: 07E0 A9F2
This was a nice piece had decent flow and the structure was steady...very decent rhyming and wordplay involved nice topic to go on and also it was very much on point...a very good piece indeed...7.5/10...
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11-30-04, 08:59 AM
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Hates Fucking Idiots
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IP: 07E0 A9F2
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11-30-04, 02:19 PM
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***cITYSLICka***
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IP: E31B AA42
DAMN!this piece was good.wordplay,imagery,vocab-it was all there.9/10..keep em comin'
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  I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY, ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there) EVIL............backwards =............LIVE |
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12-01-04, 09:10 AM
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IP: 28AD 5545
BOOOOOOOOOOOO@stealin my open mic name.....you'll pay werd :
 still good tho 8.9/10 but no stealin names from me
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12-05-04, 12:28 AM
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Better than you..
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IP: 01C3 560C
Quote:
^food for thought wasnt it? well this is poisonous.
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Spit it from the heart, spit a thousand darts, split ya head apart…
Emcees depart, like rubin carter my hurricane left u scarred… Like a spiked bat grammatical bar, like a wonderland drug… Tumble - ing like a flagon of rum and 2 blunts, like the funk baby… |
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12-05-04, 12:51 AM
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BOOOOOO still..
you could of named it..poison for mind or something.. very dissapointed in you Trauma 
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12-05-04, 12:57 AM
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Better than you..
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IP: 01C3 560C
^^haha.......well.....im not used to dissapointing people. just take it as a compliment.
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Spit it from the heart, spit a thousand darts, split ya head apart…
Emcees depart, like rubin carter my hurricane left u scarred… Like a spiked bat grammatical bar, like a wonderland drug… Tumble - ing like a flagon of rum and 2 blunts, like the funk baby… |
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12-05-04, 12:58 AM
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IP: 3240 794D
will do...*feels over confident*
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12-05-04, 01:59 AM
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Bangs like bikini attol
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IP: FA43 CBD3
Nice shit bro..
Your elevating every time I read ya stuff. Keep up with the dope shit. |
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12-05-04, 02:07 AM
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G.Y.T.
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IP: DFAE D296
damn man, for someone new to dis site, you pretty good, i liked the first 2 lines, nyce multi's but i've seen too many ppl use those multi's n rhymes example: Me, but yea overall it was pretty good, 8/10
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12-05-04, 08:31 PM
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Better than you..
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IP: 01C3 560C
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Spit it from the heart, spit a thousand darts, split ya head apart…
Emcees depart, like rubin carter my hurricane left u scarred… Like a spiked bat grammatical bar, like a wonderland drug… Tumble - ing like a flagon of rum and 2 blunts, like the funk baby… |
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12-05-04, 08:32 PM
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IP: 0825 899A
BOOOOOOOOOOOO now you stople my ^___________^ LOL
that's it now you get this smiley 
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12-05-04, 08:36 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 1F19 D2B9
lmao@indeph haha...well this was a good peice feelin it good...8/10..
now drop feed in my collabs links in da sig homes |
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12-05-04, 08:36 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 1F19 D2B9
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hoes that feel indeph you bitch... |
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