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Ebonicz | 0 | 0% | |
OptiKaL | 5 | 100.00% | |
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12-08-04, 08:13 PM | #1 | |
Flyweight
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Ebonicz vs OptiKaL
IP: BCEA 3A7F
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6 - 12 No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting no feedin off whoeva drops first Minimum posts to vote: 30 Check in by: 12-08-04 at 09:13 PM Must drop verse in 145 minutes after check in. |
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12-08-04, 08:14 PM | #2 | |
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IP: BCEA 3A7F
OptiKaL has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-08-04 08:14 PM.
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12-08-04, 08:41 PM | #3 | |
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IP: 32C6 B817
Ebonicz has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-08-04 08:41 PM.
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12-08-04, 08:51 PM | #4 | |
Intangeable
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IP: 32C6 B817
if optikal think he got a chance it all an ilusion
i got more advantage on him then the big L and tupac fusion i will go on whit this punk and till i get sued for verbal aubsion if he still got a shot then he better take it quick cuz im fully load and im readdy to empty my clip unless you wanna catch a sulg you better run or youll be bleeding on the rug you life is done see ill fuckup every thing you will ever love or charish evan his dream to make it big will fuckin Parish see i got aint the shit to audio so ill be text in ya i got ya mind so boggled you be have'n dilexia now that he all fucked up my word will be infectin ya
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12-08-04, 09:51 PM | #5 | |
Flyweight
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IP: BCEA 3A7F
gave you 3 hours but u prolly need a month to write ya verse.....we all know ur ryhme gonna be played out if u diddnt try n bite it first//
literally i attak cuz u cant hak it wit my raps lyrically... madda fac; u remind me off pizza hut wit no drivers the way u lak's delivery// U.......fuk's wit me?NAH u aint got the ability...to compere wut such a real emcee...who'z lines spark electricity to burn hiz competitors wit wordz so brilliantly// yo' my punchlinez bloody ya mouth like if you were spittin glass...cept'ya spitz is wak,n breakin c.cd.'s be the only way this cat iz rippin traks// keystylin n u still bout to die....the worst part iz u tried ya hardest while i diddnt have to try// |
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12-08-04, 10:14 PM | #6 | |
No Relation To Tina
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IP: 7358 D119
Voted For: OptiKaL
voted for optikal because............. optikal....you had some nice mataphors in your verse....punchlines killed him....nice multis.....the only thing wrong with your verse was that your structure is fucked......work on that and you will be a very good battler....overall a nice verse.....u hit harder ebonics.....your verse was kind of simple...no multis...no vocab....meta's.......it was a decent verse but those are some of the things you should consider working on....no hate... i voted for optik because...punches hit harder...he had more multis...metaphores were there....and overall his whole verse was just a lot nicer.....no hate to either one of you....good battle.... |
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12-08-04, 11:10 PM | #7 | |
Intangeable
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IP: 32C6 B817
well w/e as you can see i took me 10 minutes to wright this shit
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12-08-04, 11:34 PM | #8 |
Banned
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IP: B417 DEF0
Voted For: OptiKaL
flow: ebonic just cuz it flowed alot better off the toung punches: optikal hes punches was alot harder and was more direct and raw... creativeness: optikal cuz hes punches was original and hes verse wasnt basic or average all around preety good drop just fix ya structure...... vote: optikal |
12-09-04, 12:31 AM | #9 | |
Flyweight
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IP: BCEA 3A7F
fa show im not use to this site yet thats y my structure iz fuked
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12-09-04, 03:50 PM | #10 | |
Flyweight
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IP: BCEA 3A7F
up up and away lets get this ova with............/.
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12-09-04, 05:16 PM | #11 | |
Flyweight
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IP: BCEA 3A7F
come on people i votwe on all the battlez up in here so return the favor
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12-09-04, 07:35 PM | #12 | |
Flyweight
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IP: BCEA 3A7F
one last time fuka'z vote please..................
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12-09-04, 08:25 PM | #13 |
...Jea...
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This was feedback posted for OptiKaL
IP: 0825 899A
just checkin da polls.........uppin dis for optikal.....
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12-09-04, 10:39 PM | #14 |
Flyweight
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IP: 4792 68BF
Voted For: OptiKaL
man this battle straight sucked. Flow was ebonics was off a little bit because of the 1 syllable rhymes you should mix it up with multis ya need to elevate. Optikal you were alrite nothing hard hitting but kept it decent. ur ryhme gonna be played out if u diddnt try n bite it first
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12-09-04, 11:04 PM | #15 | |
Flyweight
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IP: BCEA 3A7F
K.o............................................... .......
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