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Mentally Ill 0 0%
?~*¤½Spectacular ½Amazing¤*~¿ 5 100.00%
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Old 12-07-04, 09:34 PM   #1
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Mentally Ill vs ?~*¤½Spectacular ½Amazing¤*~¿

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Old 12-07-04, 09:35 PM   #2
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?~*¤½Spectacular ½Amazing¤*~¿ has ACCEPTED this battle on 12-07-04 09:35 PM.
 
Old 12-07-04, 09:42 PM   #3
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Old 12-07-04, 10:02 PM   #4
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I have better things to do then think about a verse for u...so let me key somethin


Lame-Dick, But Still Talk Shit, Think You So Ill? Well Then, Dawg Heres-A-Kick//
Cuz The Only Time That Your "Mentally-Ill" Is When Your "Brains-Sick"//(1)
Flow-Is-Weak,Beatin Me?Why Do You Even Speak, Deserve Ta-Get-Beat//
So I'll Rip The "Cents/Sense" Through Ya "Mouth", Cuz Ya "Talk-Is-Cheap"//(2)
I "Side-Kick" Ya Face, And Commense Ta Rip-Ya-Maze,Dawg Ur Outta Place//
So I Tear-Ya-Legs And Remove Your "Mobil"-ity Cuz I Can Kill You In "3 Ways"//(3)

Explanations: Bar 3:mobil has to do wit cell phone, a side-kick is a 3way mobile device....now you get it?

wow...that took LITERALLY 3 minutes...haha....drop mental

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Old 12-07-04, 10:05 PM   #5
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o shit....i posted that bitch like 100 times.......ima get that fixed.....lol
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Old 12-09-04, 01:24 AM   #6
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im all vet...im here for everyone to look at like a wall sketch...
ur verses are basic...ive seen larger bars in cages for small pets/
bitch u aint all that...i'm in all black like adidas wit no stripes...
ur recievin tha L right?..have a heart..and take tha beatin of ur life/
writin ur name beside me is tha only way ur next to me chump...
plex wit me punk?..i'll walk on ya lines as if i was gettin tested for drunk
let's get serious...cus when i show tha tek u get nervous...
ya chest burstin..i'll cure ur heat like i was voted best of the nurses/
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Old 12-09-04, 07:19 PM   #7
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Good drop........now vote people...........
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Old 12-09-04, 08:11 PM   #8
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vote bitches..........................................
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Old 12-09-04, 08:18 PM   #9
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come on peeps................vote......................... uppin
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Old 12-10-04, 11:02 AM   #10
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This was feedback posted for Mentally Ill

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just check'inpoll but if i had to vote mentally ill would of got my vote N thats not cuz hes on my team cuz he actully beat u hands down.....
 
Old 12-10-04, 03:08 PM   #11
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uppin peeps...........................................
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Old 12-10-04, 07:19 PM   #12
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Voted For: ?~*¤½Spectacular ½Amazing¤*~¿

ill breakdown:
Lame-Dick, But Still Talk Shit, Think You So Ill? Well Then, Dawg Heres-A-Kick//
Cuz The Only Time That Your "Mentally-Ill" Is When Your "Brains-Sick"//(1)
played concept and very stretched out but decent punch
Flow-Is-Weak,Beatin Me?Why Do You Even Speak, Deserve Ta-Get-Beat//
So I'll Rip The "Cents/Sense" Through Ya "Mouth", Cuz Ya "Talk-Is-Cheap"//(2)
decent nice wordplay but still very strecthed
I "Side-Kick" Ya Face, And Commense Ta Rip-Ya-Maze,Dawg Ur Outta Place//
So I Tear-Ya-Legs And Remove Your "Mobil"-ity Cuz I Can Kill You In "3 Ways"//(3)
very strecthed but this is the best punch in your verse,nice wordplay here.

your verse was overall decent,but u came stretched.but u made up for being stretched by comen with some good multis.

mental:

im all vet...im here for everyone to look at like a wall sketch...
ur verses are basic...ive seen larger bars in cages for small pets/
selfglorifying at first but good punch
bitch u aint all that...i'm in all black like adidas wit no stripes...
ur recievin tha L right?..have a heart..and take tha beatin of ur life/
weak punch and kind of stretched,and first line was selfglorifying without connecting
writin ur name beside me is tha only way ur next to me chump...
plex wit me punk?..i'll walk on ya lines as if i was gettin tested for drunk
nice multis and creative punch
let's get serious...cus when i show tha tek u get nervous...
ya chest burstin..i'll cure ur heat like i was voted best of the nurses/
nice multis but kind of weak

overall decent verse.......

this is a close battle but im going with logic because he had better punches.even tho he was stretched he made up for it with multis.mentally had some good punches but he was selfglorifying at some points which killed it.so my vote goes to....
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Old 12-10-04, 07:21 PM   #13
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Voted For: ?~*¤½Spectacular ½Amazing¤*~¿

illogic took the crown wit this one. Definately had a better flow, better vocab, and better punches. From beginning to end this one beat mentallys.
 
Old 12-10-04, 09:06 PM   #14
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ite may'n...uppin peeps............................
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Old 12-11-04, 12:13 AM   #15
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uppin yall..........................................
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