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Old 07-02-02, 01:16 PM   #1
DirtBoy69
i changed my title !!
 
From: Kincardine Ontario
dirtboy69 vs Pestilence

IP: CE07 81DB

50 points on the line
first to five votes win
or a 3-0 shutout for a k.o
ten line max and verses due tomorrow

here's mine :



This kid is so bitch I caught him sittin down to take a piss/
I’m so confident that I’m gonna beat you that I’m throwing punches with open fists/
Swinging daggers at you to watch you bleed to death with open wrists/
Like a blind man on a target range your punches are a sure miss/
Killing this kid’s verse with a ruler so you know your straight losin/
Like drunk monkeys in straight jackets your punches aren’t abusing/
With every punch I throw this battle approaches conclusion/
Following the trail of losses just find out where you’ve been/
I’d use your name in this verse but that’s been done/
Then again that’s like me winning this battle cause I’ve already won/
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Old 07-02-02, 01:18 PM   #2
DirtBoy69
i changed my title !!
 
From: Kincardine Ontario
IP: CE07 81DB

and people vote on my other battle it's been going for like almost a week
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=15268
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


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Old 07-02-02, 01:59 PM   #3
J.T. KNUCKLES
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ANTE UP !!!!! 1:45 ET TIME real quick freestyle

IP: 1034 3227

I know you swing wit open fists cause you a Bitch//
my lyrical Wits leave yo shit in Deep Space-six//
you submitt like a slave yous a kunta-kinte//
ima press stop on yo shit cause it's been played//
you should of stayed at home cause you Bitch-made//
but now ima spit in yo face like a 12 gauge at yo ribcage//
you cant use my name cause yo shit is all Pre-MADE//
I Cremate you when I spit off this mind of mine//
so ima hit Dirtboy wit my SIX-NINES//
so Dirtboy I must be "Drunk" and blind~ cause I aint really fuckin feelin yo rhymes//1

not long enough battle.
Verses in Vote.1
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Here is a little warning,don't bring attention to your words like that,they were size fucking 15,that isn't needed,don't make your words any bigger than size 1.

Thank You and have a nice day

Last edited by Loggix : 07-02-02 at 08:06 PM.
 
Old 07-02-02, 07:54 PM   #4
DirtBoy69
i changed my title !!
 
From: Kincardine Ontario
IP: CE07 81DB

uppin this for votes now
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Old 07-02-02, 08:08 PM   #5
biggdz40cal
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dirt came real ill but you could tell how pest came raw from the DOME!! " Too much Orginization equals wack RAPresentation" vote = pest
 
Old 07-03-02, 07:16 AM   #6
DirtBoy69
i changed my title !!
 
From: Kincardine Ontario
IP: CE07 81DB

uppin this that vote doesn't make much sense but i ain't gonna whine about it so it's 1-0 for the other guy
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Old 07-04-02, 06:31 AM   #7
DirtBoy69
i changed my title !!
 
From: Kincardine Ontario
IP: 7D77 8113

don't sleep vote on this battle
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Old 07-05-02, 06:48 AM   #8
DirtBoy69
i changed my title !!
 
From: Kincardine Ontario
IP: CE07 81DB

more votes !!
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Old 07-05-02, 12:43 PM   #9
Mystery~murdera
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From: New Jersey
Re: dirtboy69 vs Pestilence

IP: A3E7 6C20

Quote:
Originally posted by DirtBoy69

This kid is so bitch I caught him sittin down to take a piss/
I’m so confident that I’m gonna beat you that I’m throwing punches with open fists/
Swinging daggers at you to watch you bleed to death with open wrists/


I loved this begginin, that shit was hott. the flow was nice i was feelin both flows, i think pest got the win though, his punches were harder, i don't even know if you countin this vote cuz i am a newbie but if you do i gotta barely give it to pest
vote=pestilence
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Old 07-05-02, 03:23 PM   #10
DirtBoy69
i changed my title !!
 
From: Kincardine Ontario
IP: CE07 81DB

2-0 for him uppin for the come back
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Old 07-06-02, 12:30 AM   #11
rollindubbs
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a dirt boy some times people see shit different. and i see it YOUR WAY.

dirt
"This kid is so bitch I caught him sittin down to take a piss/"
that took it!!! need I say more


couldn't feel this line:

"I know you swing wit open fists cause you a Bitch//
my lyrical Wits leave yo shit in Deep Space-six//
you submitt like a slave yous a kunta-kinte//
ima press stop on yo shit cause it's been played//"

vote= dirt
 
Old 07-06-02, 06:51 AM   #12
DirtBoy69
i changed my title !!
 
From: Kincardine Ontario
IP: CE07 81DB

2-1 for pest now let's finish this
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win loss record 18-19 with 7 k.o's


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Old 07-06-02, 08:35 AM   #13
rar one
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From: In Bed With Your Girls Mouth On My Dick
Vote= DirtBoy

IP: 38EE 9E8C

Feeding off a verse is bitch.. an plus if your gunna feed at least make it ill as fuck..

the "slapping with open fist" part was an ill line.. But i dont feel like quoteing

Dirt came with a better punchs,metas,and rhyme scheme
But barley.. If pest wouldnt have fed i imght have liked his verse a lil more... But yah... Dirt came better

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Old 07-06-02, 09:22 AM   #14
k1ll@~m1c
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vote=dirtboy
i wus feelin his punches more he started off betta n da beginin dan pest
 
Old 07-08-02, 09:21 AM   #15
~SHELZZ~
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stupid ass

IP: 4427 437B

yo Pestilence had tha better verse?
I thought if you go second you spose to feed off your
emcees a little cause you want your verse to be better than theres? am I right?
Quote:
This kid is so bitch I caught him sittin down to take a piss/
I’m so confident that I’m gonna beat you that I’m throwing punches with open fists/

good one so this is how pestlence started
Quote:
I know you swing wit open fists cause you a Bitch//
my lyrical Wits leave yo shit in Deep Space-six//
you submitt like a slave yous a kunta-kinte//
ima press stop on yo shit cause it's been played//


ok more:
Quote:
With every punch I throw this battle approaches conclusion/
Following the trail of losses just find out where you’ve been/
I’d use your name in this verse but that’s been done/
Then again that’s like me winning this battle cause I’ve already won/
aight then pest came back

Quote:
but now ima spit in yo face like a 12 gauge at yo ribcage//
you cant use my name cause yo shit is all Pre-MADE//
I Cremate you when I spit off this mind of mine//
so ima hit Dirtboy wit my SIX-NINES//
so Dirtboy I must be "Drunk" and blind~ cause I aint really fuckin feelin yo rhymes//


like what bigg40 said yo Rappresentation and pest got it
his punches came harder than Dirtboy and it was all freestyle
 
 


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