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12-16-04, 07:09 PM
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Banned: Biting
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Hang-Man Diss
IP: 93C0 D1DD
Hang-Man Has His Mouth Open, More Then Prostetutes, He's In More Shit Then Horse Shit On A Cowboys Boots, You Aint Repping Shit, Nigka Sit Your Ass Back Down, Your Bars Are More Recycled Then College Rule, Clown, Hang-Man? Dont You Mean Woman, I Think You Do, You Got No Clue Who You Fucking With Do You,? Getting Dick Riders To Vote On Your Battles..You Suck, You Duck More Times Then C.A.L.I, In Reborn, Little Fuck[No Offense To C.A.L.I.] I've Merked You Once And I'll Do That Shit Over Again, Your Rap Verse Career Is Aproaching It's Enitity The End, Stunting Around This Site Like You A Legendary Emcee, Frunting Like You SomeBody But Really Your An Envy, I Empty Verses On Faggots Like YourSelf, Call For Back-Up, I Stack-Up Wins Like Lil C.A.L.I Scream For Help So Man-Up, Stand-Up For What You Believe And Get More Losses On Your Record, Under Pressure I'll Wreck Your Precious Record Coz I'm A Wrecker, Say My Name In Ya Verse Again You Better Be Able To Back-It, I'm Laughing At You Donuts Type Ass, Trying To Flow And Rap-It, You've Bin Owned More Times Then Kids By Play Station Two Games, I Got Nothing Left To Say To You And Your Crew, You All Lames, Sit Down Bitch I Know You Done Seen Me....... Structure Fucked Up Yea I Know Last edited by Zeke : 12-16-04 at 07:19 PM. |
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12-17-04, 10:26 PM
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#2
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 93C0 D1DD
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12-18-04, 01:52 AM
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..Rv Sucks..
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IP: 408D D2A2
this was a pretty decent peice i felt the punches coulda been a lil harder and a lol better vocab coulda helped this a lil....flow fell off a lil here and there but it as a good piece..nice diss......some lines were funny.....thays always a plus....work on multi's some to help out ya flow........just being honest
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12-18-04, 01:58 PM
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#4
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 93C0 D1DD
Good Look Upping.............
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12-18-04, 02:36 PM
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Light Weight
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IP: 5BA9 4BAA
i didnt like the peice at all to b ehonest i thought
your punchlines didnt hit hard enough and your vocab can use a lil work how ever u had a lot of agressionin this that could be felt and it basically carried your drop any ways keep elevating!! |
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12-18-04, 02:36 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 93C0 D1DD
Okay....Upping..........
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12-20-04, 03:52 AM
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#7
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 93C0 D1DD
Upping This Hang-Man Diss Mang
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12-20-04, 11:36 AM
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#8
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Sam Dope
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IP: 3240 794D
I liked it...Punches really couldve hit harder tho...Ive seen ya shit man...I know u can do better than this...But, overall, it was still a solid piece...7.5/10...1
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12-20-04, 02:45 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 93C0 D1DD
Werd, It Was On ly A 5 Minute Thing
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12-20-04, 06:04 PM
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The King
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IP: A26E 4629
i liked it but i ain't never heard of that hang man bitch lolol
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12-20-04, 11:32 PM
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Home Of Philly
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IP: 2A78 666D
HaHa He Merked Tha Fuck Out Of HangMan This Shit Wass Decent 4rm Tha Punches Ta Tha Pesonals Good Shit Cus...
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12-20-04, 11:55 PM
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SEE YA AT THE TOP
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IP: 1EDC 673C
shit was good, i seen harder but fuck it you can murk this hang bitch
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12-21-04, 01:05 PM
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Seattle Hat Wit A Lean
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IP: 2B9D 28F8
not bad, but honestly i think that this was some of your worst stuff, ive seen you do lots better but its still not bad...
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12-23-04, 03:00 PM
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..I'm Back..
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IP: 93C0 D1DD
Yea, I Have Dont Better But This Was 10 Minutes
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12-23-04, 03:56 PM
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IP: 6EB9 28C9
This was fuckin garbage.
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