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I see ur into emotional --ish DV...hey man, I'm the gay guy, i'm supposed to be the emotional one...LOL...j/k

ne way


i wasn't feelin the voice at the beginning...sort of a cross between Britney Spears and a chipmunk

but the words were good...just couldn't tell if it was a sample sped up or someone who actually sounded like tha



ummm...flow was good at the start...the transition between the 1st verse and the chorus coulda been smoother with ad libs or something


mixing was good


2nd cat...flow was nice...rode the beat well



Triple's voice mixed with the soft tone of the chorus created an interesting contrast

not bad


Triple's flow was good...delivery was good...but needed a softer voice to blend in better with the tone of the track...be tender...LOL j/k



umm...this was good


7.5-8/10




stay up


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yea....im feelin this right here....i like the beat...pretty good...lyrics were good....Dv just improve quality...like buy a new mic

the first dude Jpoll...lyrics coulda been betta tho...and vocals seemed kinda low...

Triple...lol...i can see how the emotion can go both ways on this track...but damn yo...u coulda had a more mellow voice....lyrics were still good tho...just dont be so rough wit a touchin track...lol...

it was good tho...and i dont give number ratin...

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this was good, wasnt feel'n da hook
triple N seemed outta place lol, his voice is way different than the other 2, but its all good. Nice lyrics by all.

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

1-Jpoll
2nd-Me
3rd-Triplenizlle


Forgat to add that..lol

But yea thnx

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this a remix on a jedi mind beat...its a sick sample also...feedback please...good job triple, nice job dv...let's get some feed...

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^^^ thought i noticed that from one of my cds from my collection!

Oh first 2, you guys sounded pretty average altho you had nice lyrics, best voice was last man, sound a little like Xzibit or something

uppin let's get some comments hmm...jpolls first track in a while...actually I recording this about 3 months ago, btu still comments please

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Hey, good track fellas,
jpoll~you started off good, your flow was on point, but i heard where you stop and start again, try to mix it better, but nice job,lyrics were great..havent heard you in awhile
Deadly~nice emotion man, always, good lyrics as well, still heard some pops but it got better
Triple~nice jumpoff into your verse...very hard sounding, and emotional...damn, some peeps are telling you to tone it down,but i think the power in your voice sounds great...
oh and i love the hook..gotta learn how to do that shit with vocals...anyways, dope track, i enjoyed it..1

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good track
dv y is ur production so bad u need help with that lol lots of pops

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decent track good vocals and feeling liked it alottt

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good track, this was really tight...good job

the songs pretty dope lets get a couple more replies....

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