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Old 12-15-04, 04:35 PM   #1
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I'd prefer you listen on Hi Fi or MP3 for quality and blah blah....this track goes off on haters who try to keep you down...what else can I say..lol....leave links and I'll reply back...you know how it goes..

Verse 1 - Rapidfire
Verse 2 - Me
Verse 3 - Rapidfire
Hook - Both

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Old 12-15-04, 10:35 PM   #2
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It's a bit hard to understand you at points because it sounds like you try to rush more multis than you can fit in a bar. Quality is a bit scratchy. Other than that I'm diggin it :thumbsup:

btw check out "Smack Down" if you get a chance
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Old 12-17-04, 02:21 PM   #4
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^Aight...btw...I think your talking about Rapid....
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Old 12-17-04, 03:12 PM   #5
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1st kid- voice is scratchy quality blah....could be way betta....he sounds young aswell

2nd kid- Mr Sinfull himself..lol U came stronge, quality is blah!! like mine...flow was nice...try to use less sylables cuz some of yo shit is stretched and u try to fit it...but u had the best flow in this shit

3rd kid- Rapid again u got lyrics i think this is way betta than yo 1st one.....


Overall 6/10

Nice track
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Old 12-18-04, 08:08 PM   #6
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that shit was aight........ i wasnt feelin the beat that much, but it wasnt horrible or anythin... the first guy had good emotion and good lyrics, but his quality was blah...... smoka was better with the quality, way better...... both of u seemed comfortable on the mic, but smoka had a weird way of not rhymin his bars at the end.......still sounded ok...... decent track... neither of u shined more on the track... kinda even for me..... 6.5/10
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