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12-19-04, 10:17 PM | #1 | |||||||
tha tightest thang in RV since Hang-man's rope*cough pussy hole*
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just a freestyle
IP: DB6F A83E
droppin dis keystyle on some fag niggaz who think they da shit/
watch ya back lil nigga i'm creepin up real & legit, as hot as it gets/ i'm elevatin quicka than quick,my rhymes is so slick it make niggaz sick like greased owl shit/ i'm reppin da clique, u dont believe it look at my sig, ya rhymes is rigged/ i'll leave holes in niggaz bigga than Biggz,2 in ya wig,so u wont live 2 even see ya 1st gig/ Eastcoast is my nigg, tha crew name is holy like a......sacred fig/ we got hot ova night......... same popularity as a fuckin mcquigg/ i'm gettin hot toastin while i'm floatin, coastin like a hermaphrodite brig/ i'm bigga than big, and i'm bold enough 2 shit on dis kid/ votin unda different screen names thinkin nobody knows wut he did/ lil C.A.L.I need 2 get a membership at Balley, total fitness watch me rip dis/ god as my witness, if i eva seen him in da street he'd probly hide in tha alley/ i'm done wit u nigga go head & up ya shit thru out dis site, rapverse/ but next time think of repercussions 4 bustin,dont make shit adverse/
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12-21-04, 03:28 PM | #2 | |||||||
..Rv Sucks..
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IP: 408D D2A2
this was aiight kinda basic.....you had a lot of mutlis but your flow fell off some..........work on vocab and metas.........also fix up ya structure and get rid of the / after the lines its herbish and noone likes it.......jus keep doing ya thing man.....
4/10
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