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Old 12-31-04, 06:21 PM   #1
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Old 12-31-04, 06:27 PM   #2
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i was feelin this beat, it's original...
chorus was aight

1st-his flow was good, lyrics needed work tho...

2nd-ya flow was coo, lyrics could be better also, ur voice sounded well on this track.. u and KONTROVERSY GOT BEEF?! news to me.. lol

3rd-Shice: vocals so dayum low i almost thought y'all were fadin out.. but i listened to it again, he had sum better lyrics outta this one, lift his vocals!! lol

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Old 12-31-04, 09:55 PM   #3
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beat is hot..

hook is okaaaayyyyyyyyy...

1st cat flow needs work a little.. lyrics needs work as well

2nd cat voice is coo.. lyrics need some work though

3rd is coo

who ever is singin' the hook or wateva..needs some work
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Old 01-01-05, 11:57 AM   #4
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UppN dis......................
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Old 01-01-05, 12:29 PM   #5
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dis is pretty hot shit.. not feeling the hook at all.... 1st dude was alright... his voice fit the beat well.. and flow was on.. lyrics was off... 20 Grand nice flow.. good quality on this.... good lyrics " Like an abortion i aint having it" nice.. third guy.. i agree with Fiya he needs to change his vocals up a little.. but neverthelesss i dope drop.... iiight.. pz
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