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Old 12-21-04, 10:56 PM   #1
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This is a collab between me and d.j em sce

you heard it right.....good old creativitie is going audio

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Old 12-21-04, 11:44 PM   #2
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first guy sounds forced flow, like he readin cuz he speeds up random to try and catch up to the beats flow... lyrics are pretty good
enygma ur flow is the same, no matter the beat lol, good lyrics like always, more on flow. u should try somethin diff though, just my opinion, same emotion and style on every track, but its good.

overall 7.5/10 i liked the beat and the ending was sweet
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Old 12-21-04, 11:51 PM   #3
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I like my flow....lol. Anyway, thanks for the feed.....I'll try to switch it up a little in the future
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Old 12-22-04, 12:16 AM   #4
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naw i like ur flow too, just ur speed is always the same.. lol
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Old 12-22-04, 03:11 AM   #5
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i didnt even get to here it be4 you dropped it but ohwell...
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i just listened to it its coo.....but my voiuce sounds wierd but nice....why oyu have to drop harder than me....i should have tried harder..lol but nice spit enygma.....u[ppin for feedback
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Old 12-22-04, 08:55 AM   #7
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yea ur flow wasw off dj but hey all u can do is elevate so work on it
enygma seemed kinda off flow to me too
this track was ok ive heard better from e
dj hit me up so we can collab
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Old 12-22-04, 09:07 AM   #8
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yeah dj emsce was off beat like a mf, but yo stay up. enygma decent spit, not the best. i liked the OC samples, thats old school gangsta. lol.
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Old 12-22-04, 03:48 PM   #9
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Listening...

Dj Em Ce...a'ight flow...your delivery is pretty good...but your voice quality ain' great...sounds like somethin off of an old radio...beat is a'ight...

Enygma...dope as always haha...damn near perfect flow...nice lyrics...multies...nice haha...you never dissapoint...

Overall a decent track...Dj wasnt bad for his first audio (?) but everybody can use elevation in audio (like me)...pretty dope track keep em comin!

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Old 12-23-04, 02:42 AM   #10
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i spit an accapala and then enygma put it to a instramental.......so thats why i sound offf
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Old 12-23-04, 03:51 AM   #11
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listening........ first dude...........

shouldnt been on the track......... flow was off like mad......... maybe if he rode the beat he woulda been on point......lyrics werent that bad... but he needed to ride the beat..... nahmean?

enyma....... ripped it.... Necro style .....for real..... thats not hate..... cuz dude be ripping it..... you got flow son...... pleasent dropings... rode the beat.... multis like whoa!..... feeling it.....

overall... 7.0.....

woulda been a lot hotter if the first cat was on the beat.... but ..... no hate.... next time spit wit the track you dropping to... woulda come off a lot hotter......

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Old 12-24-04, 11:23 AM   #12
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it was aight but dj was off beat enygma had a str8 flow nice lyrics by both....keep dropping stay up
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Old 12-25-04, 09:30 PM   #13
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DAmn Enygma....... ur flow is killer...... but u needa switch it up once in a while.... i actually think if on one track u were doin that rushed flow and than at a couple bars slow it down majorly that itd be tight..... u still killed it, but u do needa switch it once in a while........ not switch ur entire flow on one track, but just switch it up once in a while on it...

creativitie was aight....... shoulda had him rerecord a couple times to get his flow right, but he had aight presence....... but he does need to improve...... could be pretty decent if he came harder like he sed he could........ besides that it was aight

i dont like givin out ratings but it was decent....... but enygma has had better collabs....
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Old 12-26-04, 01:44 PM   #14
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creativitie i liked ur verse, but u were off, enygma did very good as usual.... i was feelin how this got mixed, i wouldn't change any parts of this........ stay up, y'all..
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Old 12-28-04, 02:45 AM   #15
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i was off but thats becuz enygma added my voice at the wrong piont...so yeah.....
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