ok, i have been on this site for a little while doin battles and such. my record is like 4-4. i dropped this short key below, and please gimme some feedback on improvements that could be made in my style, cuz im not doin that well on this site so far. thanks.

yo anyone that wanna drop, in a battle VS Gok/
got anotha thing comin, whether i go hard or not/
wit nouns and verbs i kick them to tha curb, in a blur/
like some rice you'll be fried and stirred, thats my word/
wit lyrics, i reincarnate spirits so they can hear-it/
life has passengers and drivers/
gimme the wheel so i can steer-it/
the puns alone, got they own flow/
when its on in a go, do i hesitate? no!/
i just spit whatever comes out, so watch ya mouth/
gonna show u how tha DAI GAO gets down/