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12-29-04, 12:57 PM
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tha tightest thang in RV since Hang-man's rope*cough pussy hole*
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Places 2 go, People 2 see: freestyle
IP: 8E56 7956
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i got places 2 go got people 2 see i'm comin 4 u hoes who tried 2 fuck wit me 1 can kiss my ass tha otha blow dick 4 runnin ya mouf fast u'll end up in a hole quick i'm on a mission 2 get richer, ambitions of flippin scripture on these bitches and they censure, cuz when i look in tha mirror I see a shadow in tha darkness just waitin 4 bitches 2 start shit bitch controversy i spark it, hit my enemies with darts-it makes tha faggots go retarded kill 'em wit lyrical bombardment strap they ass up in a harness beat 'em while they unguarded their screams is neva regarded their dreams are now discarded i'm not playin around no more so when kilo walks in tha door i'm bringin with me true war and my enemies they'll soar when i smack 'em up like a whore i'm tha 1 tha bitches adore tha 1 that tha hoes send for reason for their clothes' decore ......oh my, hoes is galore when my gats take tha floor its not playtime anymore i'm exposin blood and gore like tha american civil war I'm tired of these bitch cowards justa lookin at me all sour i'll beat 'em 2 a bloody scour and resume my world power like osama bin laden xcept i aint in hidin or maybe sadaam hussein with fatalities in my brain quite possibly W.Bush controllin tha Hindu Kush like salt n peppas hook all imma do now is push, push i'm pushin 4 prominence pushin for complete dominance of my enemies and foes they such pitiful hoes *i got places 2 go i got people 2 see i'm comin 4 u hoes who decided 2 fuck wit me* i'll beat u right quick wit da Rodney knifestick den leave u in a ditch quiverin like a bitch i got places 2 go got people 2 see i'm comin 4 u hoes who tried 2 fuck wit me 1 can kiss my ass tha otha blow dick 4 runnin ya mouf fast u'll end up in a hole quick
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12-29-04, 01:03 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: ED58 7340
this was pretty dope. had a nice flow to it. i liked the rhyme scheme becuz it hlped the flow and was consistant throughout the entire verse and the scheme was pretty unique. the bars were also at good length in this one..were not stretched at all through out the entire piece. i couldnt really find any weaknesses except at a few points the flow was a bit off but not that often. next time you do a piece, i recommend you be more complex. it makes it fun to read and more people will want to reply to your work.
8/10 Last edited by X-§tatic : 12-29-04 at 01:07 PM. |
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12-29-04, 01:09 PM
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tha tightest thang in RV since Hang-man's rope*cough pussy hole*
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IP: 8E56 7956
aight dawg.........thanks 4 da feedback i'll keep dat in mind.
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12-29-04, 01:24 PM
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tha tightest thang in RV since Hang-man's rope*cough pussy hole*
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IP: 8E56 7956
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- this could be you. if you have ever witnessed or experienced unwilling intercourse with a Zoo animal please call 1-800-CARNIVAL-BIATCH extention:BUTT RAPEAll Out Warfare open mic me vs. magical |
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12-29-04, 01:51 PM
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Flyweight
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IP: D3B1 D7CF
That Shit Was Raw Fa Real I Can See That Shit On Radio Good Shit Check Out Ma Open Battles
Chuck Low Vs. Death Chuck Low Vs. Denied Truth Chuck Low Vs. Kkkhater Chuck Low Vs. Javelin |
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12-29-04, 02:38 PM
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tha tightest thang in RV since Hang-man's rope*cough pussy hole*
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IP: 8E56 7956
aight dawg i'll hit up ya battles 2......thanks 4 tha feedback
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12-29-04, 10:14 PM
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tha tightest thang in RV since Hang-man's rope*cough pussy hole*
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IP: DB6F A83E
get up get on up mothafucka get up....get on up.........lol james brown in dis mothafucka..........uppin
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12-29-04, 10:37 PM
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Sam Dope
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IP: 4391 3AD8
Pretty good key/freestyle man...Been really enjoying erthang you've been droppin dawg...This was some club/get hype shit...feelin the way the structure was set up...really helped the flow...Good shit man...1
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12-29-04, 11:03 PM
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Whys That?
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IP: 4CC6 FB9A
ok drop, you have a stable flow, bar's could be a bit longer. Good rhyme's in it. Few spot's you fell off a bit in the way of rhyme's.
. controllin tha Hindu Kush like salt n peppas hook all imma do now is push, push ^^ personnaly wasnt feeling tthese line's. overall, 6/10. keep dropping. |
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12-29-04, 11:12 PM
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tha tightest thang in RV since Hang-man's rope*cough pussy hole*
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IP: DB6F A83E
thanx 4 tha feed homie....i'll hit u back wit some feed in ya open mic
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12-29-04, 11:15 PM
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tha tightest thang in RV since Hang-man's rope*cough pussy hole*
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IP: DB6F A83E
o my b dat wasnt yours u just posted in it......o well i'll return da fava wheneva
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