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12-27-04, 01:30 PM
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I walk & walk over you
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Freestyle #5 (diss To Poetics At My Skool)
IP: 8845 5B74
This fool made an diss track to my crew.
so i made an diss to him (havent found an beat yet) YO POETICS  Making an diss track to my crew yall will get quick lit like an candlestick bitch Why yall fucking with us, we’ll make yall have full of sorrow like ur krew poetics We’ll ripp yall into sections, like your punches with no signal, they’re no connecting Saying “we’ll shit on you’? kid how the fuck” you’re the one’s who is constipating I cant play the guitar but I’ll take it and bash it on your head, leaving you thoughtless rock aint gay? What’s that shit called when you running around in circle? The cock pit? I gotten personal with your ass, call me an book worm nigga, cause I can read you Call me crew an mop, cause we’ll verbally clean you, making your bodies an see through Sickness? I don’t seek thee, you have weak knees, didn’t do nothing when I got in your bio’s face And you’re the leader of the crew, didn’t even stood for your own member, damn what an disgrace
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.:* Crhyme Sindicate* :.
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12-27-04, 01:55 PM
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I walk & walk over you
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IP: 8845 5B74
Um Uppin For Some God Damn Votes Holla At Cha Boi~!
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12-27-04, 02:39 PM
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I walk & walk over you
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IP: 8845 5B74
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1848456
thats one~~! 2nd one is coming http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post1848458
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12-27-04, 05:45 PM
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I walk & walk over you
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IP: 8845 5B74
Man C'mon Uppin For Some Damn Feedbacks Holla At Cha Boi~!
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12-27-04, 06:19 PM
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...Jea...
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IP: 28AD 5545
ight...i could tell it wuz a freestyle...some lines didnt ryhme...some good punches though and wordplay...id give it a 7/10...couldve been improved though.......~1~
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12-27-04, 06:42 PM
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I walk & walk over you
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IP: 8845 5B74
thanks for the feedback fam. uppin for some more feedbacks. Don't sleep on this open mic freestyle, Chea bitches
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12-30-04, 01:01 AM
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I walk & walk over you
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IP: 057B 81F6
Damn come on uppin for some more feedbacks. Holla at your boi.
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12-31-04, 06:40 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 5043 32F4
pretty good......your stucture still needs work and you still use to many words to flow proper but i guess audio is different it was all good n all....but jsut work on those use like 6-13 word per line....its what i doo....but overal this was a tight drop...8/10
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