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Old 12-30-04, 01:08 PM   #1
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This Power Drunkened Society Compromises My Minds Sobriety
In MOck Piety A Scheme IS Devised to Wrench My-Life-From-Me
The Black Man...Earths First and Forgotten Son The Intellect Of HUmanity
iTs Such a Tragedy to Go from Imperial to Poverty,
.........................................Dubbed Nigger In Place of Your Majesty
Baffled by One Calamity after Another as We Tackle Lifes Upredictable Storm
HArsh Reality is Embraced MEan
...................While the Mythical Realm of the American Dream is Torn
Weary and Worn out Are My People Tired of Discrimatory Actions of Hate
Tired of Bowing Down To the Whip of Oppresion,Agression is all we been ...........................Shown So thats All We Can Immulate
Dying Spiritually My People Reach Out To Objects That Worsen There Predictament
Things such as Diamonds and Pearls Were a Africans House Hold Items,Now UP held With SUch Redicolous
Prestige...God HElp Me, Help Us.. For We Are Mere Men In Dire Need of Restoration
Bless are Nation of Brother and Sisters With your Salvation
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Old 12-30-04, 06:05 PM   #2
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Old 12-30-04, 08:26 PM   #3
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fix the structure.. flow went so so at times

but vocab was coo though..good at that

so i give you like a 7/10
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Old 12-31-04, 02:25 PM   #4
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ok thanx my niggas ill keep that in mind
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Old 01-01-05, 11:24 PM   #5
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Originally Posted by 5MICMEDALLION
Yo prophecy you did your thing hommie i give it a 10/10
because i actually read the whole thing,,an you got nice punches
an the word play doing big things too,,,,
yo i cant hate on you,,,,,nice drop 1


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Damn yo that shit was ruff it was captivating
good story telling skills keep it up
that shit was a 10/10
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Old 01-01-05, 11:38 PM   #6
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bad structure.... some filler, but overall, not the worst
keep it up, elavate
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Old 01-02-05, 01:26 AM   #7
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ROFL huh!?!?!.......................................... ..
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Quote:
Originally Posted by 5MICMEDALLION
Yo prophecy you did your thing hommie i give it a 10/10
because i actually read the whole thing,,an you got nice punches
an the word play doing big things too,,,,
yo i cant hate on you,,,,,nice drop 1


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Damn yo that shit was ruff it was captivating
good story telling skills keep it up
that shit was a 10/10
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Old 01-02-05, 09:16 PM   #8
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Quote:
Originally Posted by 5MICMEDALLION
Yo prophecy you did your thing hommie i give it a 10/10
because i actually read the whole thing,,an you got nice punches
an the word play doing big things too,,,,
yo i cant hate on you,,,,,nice drop 1


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Damn yo that shit was ruff it was captivating
good story telling skills keep it up
that shit was a 10/10
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