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01-16-05, 12:13 AM
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thought's
IP: 8E52 E4D1
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left or right? im loosing track of time
walk blind into trouble,only see a blackened mind im lacking fine outcome's allway's negative result's like Im sick,then get injected with seditives defualt's He revolt's into the street,to witness yet more instance's lady's beating her son with his mistaken circumstance's my sister dance's around young and innocent yet to relise growing up in this world ,you gota stay vigilant a heavy stimulant allway's help's get rid of reality but it allway's prevent's me from getting a higher salery Im allway's up for a laugh......Death is a good joke Tighten the noose...pull the chair...hopfully he should choke Im usually mellow,but shit's pushed me to the edge hater's time to learn,listen....get there revenge If I upset or offend,I am no longer bothered.. I launched above the world,chilled and hovered looking at the pathetic,trivila bullshit most call life ....then they sit back talking about the harsh life while country's like west africa have endliss strife I wont defend this life,just take it how it goes My rhyme's are sweet,while most spit with sour flow's I stand strong(kia kaha)even with all of our woes kia kaha="stand strong" in my second language. moari. Distilled 1,2,3 da vinci/anxiety fuel for freestyle Last edited by "fi-del" : 01-16-05 at 12:22 AM. |
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01-16-05, 12:39 AM
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Knock out kings fur life
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IP: 58B5 0751
pretty good the flow was on and off with me but keep workin on that had pretty good multis but work on elevatin in ur vocab but over all I give u a.
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01-16-05, 12:59 AM
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IP: 2AB1 EE10
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01-16-05, 01:01 AM
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Knock out kings fur life
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IP: 58B5 0751
check out my link peace!^^^^^^^^^^
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01-16-05, 11:39 PM
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IP: 838B 916B
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01-17-05, 12:19 PM
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This Was Dope Fam, Had some real imagery in there, and flowed with the storyline all the way through.
I was feelin this man, keep em comin.
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.The Council |
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