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Old 01-09-05, 02:46 PM   #1
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Last Day Of High School

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Wake Up And Realize That Its Tha Day I Graduate..
Didn't Think I Wass Gonna Make It Half Tha Way,Now Iss Mih Turn Ta Be Congradulated...
Cee All Mih Peers That I Knew Since Freshman Year,Fa Tha Last Time Ever..
Remenice On How We Used Ta Play Fight In Tha Snowy Weather...
Tell Mih Nigga About Tha Time We Set Tha Chemistry Lab On Fire..
And He Brought Up Tha Time When We Wass In Autobody And First Fixed A Tire..
Those Wass Things I Piktured In Mih Head, Wish I Used A Kodak..
All Of Mih Friends Status Go Back,Like Tha Sayin Cadillac With 4 Flats..
We Walk Down Tha Hall Ta Tell Our Teachers Thanxs Fa Everi Thing..
All They Could Do Iss Laugh,And Say"Your And Ya Bois I Will Always Be Remembering..
Thinkin About When We Threw A Slurpee At Tha Food Inspector..
And How We Used Ta Sneek Our Phone Threw Tha Metal Detector..
10th Grade Years Wass Tha Best,I Riot Broke Out Over 40 Cops Arrived..
We All Got Arrested,Sat In Tha Cell Until Our Parents Arrived..
Iss Now 12:30 School Lets Out,Last Time Imma Cee Mih Bois Until We Get Our Diplomas..
Wonder About A Few Years Down Tha Line Will I Be A Loner...
Go Home Ta Get Dressed And Ready Fa Tha Ceremony..
Call Mih Boi Who Cant Make It Thea,Tell Him Ta Take Care Hommie..
Arrive At Tha School Freshly Dressed,Step In Tha Audoturium...
Im Pretty Late Iss 5:08 Tha Graduation Started At 4 Pm...
They Call Mih Name I Take Mih Diploma And Stay On Stage..
Cee A Girl That I Knew 4rm Tha 9th Grade,Who Used Ta Take Care Of Mih Braids..
All Tha Names Been Called And Tha Class Of 2005 Iss Finally Dawn.....(Done)
Realli Didnt Care About School,But Now I Know That You Dont Miss Somethin Tell Iss Completely Gone................
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Old 01-09-05, 02:47 PM   #2
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Uppin Some Feed Juss Somethin I Thaught Of............
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Old 01-09-05, 05:09 PM   #3
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not to bad, a couple of stretched lines in it.

And He Brought Up Tha Time When We Wass In Autobody And First Fixed A Tire..
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just one of them.


flow was ok, but with the strecthed line's it would work with a beat, you would have to spit the longer line faster than the rest to say it all in time with a beat.


topic is good.rhymes are nice.

good drop,keep dropping.
return the feed.
links?
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Old 01-09-05, 06:16 PM   #4
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Iight I Will,Uppin This Still...............
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Old 01-09-05, 06:18 PM   #5
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tite man...the flow was kinda off, but the message was on point and the metas was dere. it should b a audio. that would sound crazy if u had a jigga beat. good shit homie
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Old 01-09-05, 09:23 PM   #6
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Uppin Fa Some Feed Damn.................
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Old 01-09-05, 09:26 PM   #7
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dis shit was hot guy...i give it a 8.5/10...yo metas was all hot....damn, it was just tight

and check out my new OM "susan, susan...", its somethin different 4real
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Old 01-10-05, 12:52 AM   #8
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nice drop work on tryin to keep yo verse tha same lanth alll in all 8/10. Keep doin yo thing
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Old 01-11-05, 12:45 AM   #9
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Uppin This Shit Fa Feed................................
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Old 01-11-05, 01:34 AM   #10
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To use force is habit but like coarse fabric my patience
Wears thin who dare win in battle? Victory has fragrance
Scripts expand like strips of land unplowed make a farmer
Get a tractor become stormier than a nuclear reactor I’m a charmer
Like Dentzel I sprint well like Flo Jo but murders like Jeffrey Dahmer
Lyrics all goes wild like a bald prose style no hair on this
Affairs brisk like tea dancing in rains like Fredestair with a kiss
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