This is a very quick free type i wrote 2nite,
ive been away fo` 3 weeks ... and ive had good
reason so be ... im sorry ... that peeps have been
sleeping and i havent been round to peep ish!

What once was has now been forgotten,
dreams and hopes chucked out left and rotten -
Did you ever think or did it pass your mind,
because i did now its just turned into lost time -
I still hold a love for you but its unknown,
love delicate like a candle`s fire but now blown -
As the knife stuck in deeper i called you name,
silently in my mind hope`ing you would of came -
As the blood drip out of my wounds and ran with the rain,
tears dropped down my face with this unbelieveble pain -
Thinking it was the end i prayed to God ,
that he`ll take care of you sounds kinda odd ?
My mind full of things i wanted to say ,
to fam friends ma homiies , just give me another day -
All hope lost and my life difted away ,
i wasnt gone yet but i was slippin moments put my life to play -
All i could hear was sirens hoping they were fo` me,
the last thing i saw was lights and loud voices sayin 1-2-3 -
Woke up feeling hazy momories not quite there ,
lookign round all i could do was stare -
To sore to more or even blink an eye ,
now wishing i would of died .....

3 weeks pasted since that night ,
6 to 1 an awful fight -
Red to black and blue busted face scares too,
just the lil reminders and peeps losin there koo -
Dont know what i did to deserve what they did ,
im just a gurl basically a kid -
Physical scars emotional scares still all there,
not in the mood for tests dont even dare -
Still smiling holding it all inside,
emotional scars alot worse to what you see outside -
But to move on is the best thing i can do ,
try and forget the torture i went through -
So i guess need a lil help and time ,
ma crew homiies and ma boi holden down tha rhymes -
Coz i got love fo` yall in all ways,
ima just keep brushin tha tears as they come my way -

gurl you kno i aint go tno beef wit you jsut hush ya mouth........aight........on HHT you need to post ya three links you a sa mod gots to set an example......admins say so........just trying to help you out so settle down..........but the peice is nice as i said on HHT......anyways.........yo uaint gotta get bitchy ........LUH HAZY

sorry about ya hospital run in......deep sympathy n regards

emotional piece...but damn...thats real bad what happened...all i can say is i feel what ya saying..and gone through..but i guess its different for everyone and all that ish...anyway...i aint gonna blabber on....keep yo head up and stay strong....respect...

emotional scars alot worse to what you see outside -
But to move on is the best thing i can do ,
try and forget the torture i went through -



that shit right there was deep.. iam mos def feelin tha piece..
much luv sweat and tears...

uno

this was deep yo!! sry about the hospital stay! keep droppin hot hot hot thoughts!


check out some of my drops.

dang, only one runnin there mouth iz u!

Thanx yall,

Up

this was very dope...
I understand where your comin from...
ur work is rhymin better also...
I'm definatly feelin dis...
And ur always gettin better..
Well Done..And Much Respect..

wUn...

Three weeks eh? All I can say is damn.

I mean, I've gotten in fights plenty of times in my life. But I aint never been put in the hospital, let alone for three weeks. So y'know, I've gotten the shit beat outta me too, but I don't think as bad as you. (Although one time I broke my finger... while playing golf. Go figure.)

You should start carrying a weapon. Not a gun though, those are too unreliable. Something like a baton or brass knuckles. I heard on the news a while back a kid robbing some old guy and using his skateboard as a weapon. Just... don't ever get in that kinda situation again. (Damn, I heard shit like that all the time back in Chicago. Never thought it would happen in a place like Australia.)

Mo-Mentai

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.

i feel for ya and so do my prayers. think postive.

joey

sshit...

erm...i dont know what to type...

...

fuck it..
all i can say is that i feel fo ya. i got in more than my fair share of fights, i know more than most what your goin thru. jus keep ya head up.

shit hardly seems important, but the poetry anyway, was ill, very deep. mad props.

~G.

^^ oh, one mo thing, are you gone keep the tourney goin cause i cant wait to post next verse...