..Never Afraid..
I aint afraid of you, why bother trying to be Scary
Only jealous, so you try to defend your Disability
Im sick of trying to defend you, still you Attack me
Using my friends as bait, only so you can Attract me
I coulda fought back, wouldn’t have got be Anywhere
Now I look on the revenge, that coulda been There
The times we coulda shared were gone from day One
Cause of the differences we didn’t share, wasn’t Fun
Trying to frighten me, off words you said from Within
Day to day I studied you, it even worked, I Reckon
If you don’t believe, look at how much I’ve Improved
My skills show you how many ranks higher I Moved
I don’t care if you got a problem with me, I aint Scared
Now you got people saying you suck, must be Unfair
It took time but as you can see, I practiced and it Paid
People look at you like your scorny, the most Afraid
There will never be an end to it, so stop Experimenting
If that nagging gets out of hand, its always Upsetting
So don’t make up sentence’s, I’ve already heard Before
Go ahead blame me for your wrong, I always work Sore..
-Parallel

Links-
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=174700
^Indeph...real dope shit there

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=174342
^@. some real dope shit..

good topic, nice flow. Really liked this drop. rhymes could be a bit more solid. but they steady as it is.
structure is perfect. most the bars thru it are equal.
good drop.

nice shit cuz...u had a nice flow to it...some creative lines...nice topic also...overall this was a pretty good drop P...nice shit...keep em comin...8/10

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thanks alot.....lol...nothing better then what i usually drop but yea uppin...word

Everything Iv'e read of your's you alway's say "not my best I can do much better".
I don't think you can, rhyming was b!ah, basic. No emotion you were just babbling on about a topic and stringing word's together.
It sucked.

i can do better...if you look at my battles its where i try.....and if you think just writing words to rhyme is a topic your fucked in the head....i didnt use metas lots here but i usually use them.....
uppin..

No, bottom line is...It sucked.
Plus you don't make sense, & if it don't rhyme it should be in the poetry forum dickhead.

it does rhyme.....if you say it properly....stop posting let me get feed....
uppin

Its alright... i mean try and have more multiples... kinda simple, but it was a decent drop son... keep em' comin... just put alot of thought into it...

I gotta add more feedback apparently....

It was all in all decent and it flowed alright... Kinda played topic to put it on... nothin really too focused on...but sitll decent

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word...i did this up fast...10 min or so..uppin

Dope Topic Homie....Also The Structure Was Perfect Lol But I Was Lost SomeTime With The Flow Some Words Didnt Rhyme I Think 2 Maybe ...Nice word PLay also but not soo much vocab in this one...

My Fav Lines Had To Be-
The times we coulda shared were gone from day One
Cause of the differences we didn’t share, wasn’t Fun

nice job fam

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witch words did you think didnt rhyme...scary and disabilty rhyme if you flow it right...and Within and Reckon dont tho...iunno...lmao....uppin

uppin..........

This shit was wack as fuck, BITCH!!

Please kill yourself for dropping this wack shit..

...before i do it for you.

Start buying yourself some vaccum attatchments..

coz this fucking sucked ass.