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Its realitys spokesman the chief executive/ stop hatin mfers/ just let me live . from every rooof top/ to every mom and pop shop evil is non stop/ and kids are taught how to pop glocs / gats in they hands instead of eatin sum pop rocks/ shit has changed rearranged since i was that age/ and its strange cuz i can see evil in every mans gaze/ wicked ways womens bodies on display/ in these last days/ pathways to hell our lives resembling ash trays/
Burning the worlds turning / tell me where do we hide? / the pain is there in my eyes / so i sing sad songs like May J Blidge/ I FEEL burried alive/ under the weight of the plannet and i aint got a fucking thing to say to you damnit/ The Stock Market may fall but Hatred SOARS/ nobody loves each other look at the rate of divorce/ no remorse in mom's eyes she cries for herself/ she murdered all of her kids/ They were Crying for Help! / Reality lives in the words that i speak/ UNLESS YOU WERENT LISTENIN AND ALL YOU HEARD WAS THE BEAT..... copyright 2002 Eric Edwards whose Pseudonym is Reality |
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yo im new (to this website) so yall gimme some feedback
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IP: ADEC 56AC
flow wass good. topic was on. vocab wass good. and u got madd talent. keep postin im lookin to see more of ur shyt. uno
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IP: 5E4E 92DE
yo sinnacle i appreciate the nice review...now if i could only get out there right??? my mic voice is my best quality other than the way i write....
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IP: F8DE F595
hmmm...was certainly a raw and hard hitting piece....very good 'flow'...and solid use of vocab...i feel what you saying most def....but it seems you have a talent to depict it better...while i usually go on some next shit (!!!)....but for real....some of the ish you saying is most definetly felt....like to see more from ya...from a different perspetive maybe or something...
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